• Member Since 12th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Mar 30th, 2018

BoxedSurprise


E

When Princess Luna finds herself drunk after one of Pinkie Pie's parties, she does the most stupidest thing of all. Now, with a aching hangover, she is forced by her big sister to rectify her mistake.

A parody of the 2007 video game Beautiful Katamari

Originally titled "Katamare Damacy" (塊ポニー Katamari ponī, or “Pony Clump”)"

Title changed due to the 2007 game "Beautiful Katamari" being the more well known version.

Author's Note: Written originally for the Equestria Daily: FLASH EVENT Event here: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2012/03/flash-event-write-300-word-story.html

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

The Topic:
Everypony has completely lost control of their manes and tails! What mysterious force is causing hair everywhere to seemingly have a mind of it's own!? Is it a new villian attempting to corrupt ponyville one sideburn at a time?! Or maybe Twilight secretly screwed up a spell and doesn't know how to reverse it?


Rules:
It's up to you to think of something interesting and creative, in just 300 words. You have only a 25 word cusion, it cannot exceed 325, and it cannot be below 275.

Deadline:
Nothing specific! Set a goal for tomorrow afternoon when this post is on page two?

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Included is the EqD 325 word-capped version, and the extended version. UPDATE: Plus Epilogue to the extended version.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

lol i like little storys like dis :twilightsmile:

EQD version? But the minimum word count is 3000 for a one shot...
And, for a one shot, it didn't impress me one single bit. This is like randomness being put together...

358930 There's always one. Here: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2012/03/flash-event-write-300-word-story.html

And with that, yes this is random (which I didn't know whether to put as a tag or not; thanks for helping me with that!). Was supposed to be just a "For da lulz" kind of thing, no point other than being a Parody of a video game. :twilightsmile:

358953
Oh you meant that one off thing. Initially, I thought of the submission feature thing.I was actually finding the plot/main point of the story. One shot is good, but yet must make sense. It's not trying to throw a random bunch of words together.

359123 It's all good. :pinkiehappy:

I haven't really given a shot at a one shot, still busy with my other works. This one was just to tickle people a bit with Randomness.

359145
Well, technically very good ones on here that are under 2000 words are rare & few. (Except for comedy related crap). I haven't seen any of those kind... yet in a long long time. Oh and what inspired you to write if you don't mind?

359212 I haven't really dug around in the archives here; read a few stories on this website but not enough to gauge what constitutes as "above average" in regards to the fandom.

For my inspiration to write this particular story, the prompt on the EqD post gave me (as I interpreted) freedom to write whatever with, caution to still keep structure in mind of course. As for writing in general, well I have a rather theatrical imagination; there's always a movie playing in my mind whenever I do things like for example walking, listening to music, and writing. Writing to me is one of the ways I can solidify what I'm thinking and show it to people, whether for a practical purpose or just for fun.

This is by far the funniest fic I have seen, to date. Lol at Celestia, "I AM AN OSTRICH!" Priceless :rainbowlaugh:

This...this...what is this, I don't even.

Oh well, you made me laugh, and you did it for the lulz, so well done. :pinkiehappy:

Lol Luna so sarcastically funny
lol at the ittle too kataMa-re damacy

359612 I'm a woodpecker (THWACK) except for dirt:pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::raritywink:

Login or register to comment