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A Picnic For Two

Short story: Big Mac wants to do somthing special for Cheerilee for Hearts and Hooves Day but doesn't know what to do. So he asks Applejack about what to do.

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Frizzy

Frizzy #1 · Feb 4th, 2014 · 1 · ·

There really is nothing to this, and the dialog is just boring.

Mr Monty

Mr Monty #2 · Feb 4th, 2014 · · ·

This almost seems like a parody of romance stories. If that's the angle you were going for, great job! I laughed at the stone faced, emotionless dialogue. If not then....um..better luck next time?

Wolfemon101 #3 · Apr 2nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

Pretty sweet =)

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