Epilogue: Marriage
"Pinkie are you sure you want to go through with this? I mean you two have only been dating for 6 months."
"I'm very sure Twilight." Said Pinkie Pie as she ajusted her white wedding dress.
"But you two are so young I mean your not even middle aged yet!"
"Twilight, please i just want to do this and get it over with so we can get to the party."
"I know Pinkie but your one of my best friends I don't want to lose Ponyville's own party plann-"
"Twilight I'm pregnant..."
"Oh my gosh...Pinkie why didn't you tell anypony?"
"I was going to reveal it at the party but i guess its not so secret anymore."
"But-but how did this happen? Who did you do it with?"
"Who else did you expect?"
"Oh...With him. I never really approved of him."
"You may be a princess Twi but your not my mother."
"I know, I know." Twilight shook her head. "Just go on out there."
"Thanks Twi..." Pinkie hugged Twilight one more time and as she opened the doors to the chapel a bright light consumed her vision and the rest as they say is history.....
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You have a good storyline for this, but I would suggest slowing things down a bit. Its all crammed into a small amount of words. Other than that, you don't really have alot of writing errors.
I would say, spread out these chapters. You just had a huge leap. Best of luck with future stories.
my dear Sir did you accidentally upload the wrong chapter? because I just felt like I just jump off a cliff. It was just random. And just when did he... my brain hurts.
REWRITE THE STORY!!!!
To everyone who wishes me to extend the story I never actually planned on finishing it. In fact I wanted to delete it cause I wanted to work on the other fic Universem Der Ponys I wasn't really enthuastic about this story and I just couldn't bring myself to deleting it with the likes as well as good reviews and views in general so I may just give the rights of the fic to someone else so it will be theirs to edit
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Okay if no body wants the story i'm deleting it in 3 days
Richthofen: NIEN zis is not possible
Dempsy: The fuck you mean?
Richthofen: ZIS HAZ MORE VIEWS ZEN OUR STORY UNT IT IZ LONGER UNT BETTER!
Dempsy: Wait WHAT?!?! ALRIGHT ASS MAGGOTS GO READ UNIVERSEM DER PONYS NOW!!!
Takeo: YOU WILL ALL HAVE DISHONOR!
Nikolai: VODKA!
Cute!! It was a little fast- paced, but I loved it anyway!!
One suggestion is for you to leave out the "6 hours later part." I doubt that they would be there 6 hours while Pinkie begged. I thought this was adorable and you wrote it great!!
One more thing-you said aunt Rainbow Dash. That would mean that Dash is Pinkie's sister. You might wanna fix that. Great story though!
3898983 Same here.