Starswirl's Journal

by AlesFlamas

Entry #54 July 23, 2190

Night Three of Research:

Once again, I find the king's eyes moving quite rapidly, in stark contrast to the rest of his quite immobile body. However, the rapid movements in his eyes seem to decrease conversely to the deepness of his slumber.

I wonder. . .

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The chefs seem to have taken my comment disparaging their cooking skills quite seriously. Once again, they have provided me a meal consisting entirely of doughnuts, though it does not seem to be out of spite. They appear to be testing recipes, trying to find ways to make them better. And I admit, they have gotten better. Never underestimate a unicorn's desire to one-up those who stand beneath him.

Note: They still aren't as good as the ones the Earth ponies made.

Comments

[Brother_William]

Make them* better
And shouldn't it be "a unicorn's desire", not " a unicorns desire", since desire is possessed by the unicorn?

[AlesFlamas]

4206020 Fixed. Thanks for pointing out my mistake; I like to make my stories as grammatically correct as posible and the several broken keys on my keyboard often make that impossible.

[The1templar]

4208531 how exactly does one break a keyword key¿

[MuchAdoAboutNonny]

Quick note on Rapid Eye Movement (REM): it does NOT increase as the brain transitions to deep sleep. REM is only present in the shallowest sleep, which is when we have the most vivid dreams because our brains are more fully awake. When we're in deep sleep, the kind of sleep in which people have frozen to death before awaking, our eyes are pretty still.

[jszellmer]

5242280 With great vigor.