Starswirl's Journal

by AlesFlamas

Honeydew's Special Section for Practicing Writing #3

Mr. Starswirl is getting very worried about something. He doesn't want to talk about it. I'm sure he'll tell me later. Or maybe he won't. It's not any of my business.

. . .I'm hungry

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Mr. Starswirl really liked my daddy's cooking. He liked it so much that he makes the unicorn chefs cook Earth pony foods. It's kinda amazing. Most of them only know how to make pastries though. There was one who knew how to make daisy chain salad, but that's as far as his knowledge on Earth pony food went. So I had some daisy chain salad and a poppy seed muffin. I don't like daisies much. But momma always said that if I wanna grow up strong, I gotta eat everything on my plate and in my bowl. I never listened to momma much. . . Platinum and Clover don't seem to like daisies either. Maybe that chef was just bad at making salad.

Comments

[paul]

Dear author, I do not have some meaningful comment or constructive criticism to share, I just want to thank you for this story.
It's nice and heartwarming even in it's sad moments . I love the characters and story line (except Rain's death , but it was supposed to be that way I understand).
Please keep the story going and thank you again !

[AlesFlamas]

5584478 It's nice to get comments like these. They really do mean a lot. I hope you continue to enjoy my story.