Starswirl's Journal

by AlesFlamas

Entry #1 January 3, 2190

Today was truly a wonderous day! My father has retired as King Aurum's court wizard, and I, not surprisingly, was chosen as his replacement. I for one, intend to wow the unicorn populus with my magical prowess and keen wit. Oh yes, I can feel that this is the beginning to a marvelous career in wizardry, it is.

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[Big Brother is Watching]

King Aurum's court wizard

Fixed; remember, he's the court wizard of King Aurum, so you put a 's instead of a plain old s

Besides, that, good job, I'm liking and faving! Other than that one error, grammar is a little better than the average in fanfics.