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Cydox Crescent


This cosmic dance of bursting decadence and withheld permissions twists all our arms collectively. But, if sweetness can win, and it can, then I'll still be here tomorrow to high-five you yesterday.

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You glance around, watching, waiting. Look at the people, at their nice new clothes, their shoes without any holes, their skin with meat instead of bone. Look at them, watch them, ‘cause they're better then you are, boyo. They have chances, hope, all that jazz. That’s far more than what you got.


Cian had a hard life, and now that it is over, it seems he has been given a new one. Maybe it's a new beginning ... maybe it's a drawn out end.

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Comments ( 19 )

A few little errors here and there, but otherwise... I really like where this is going. Interesting backstory. :pinkiehappy:

4032287 Heh, could you pm me the errors so I could fix them? And thanks.

Damn...that's good. Stylistically...

I find it funny that you chose cian for a name because my name is kian

4035078 Is that so? Welp, that must've made it fun for you.

4034777 May I ask what you liked best about the style? I was kinda experimenting, so I'd love to hear what others thought of it.

4035262 Can you wait till tomorrow? I'll be able to send you a P.M. then. At the moment, I'm...facing a lack of focus I feel that only sleep can remedy.

gonna read this later. looks good

Following this story... Bro, I don't think you give yourself enough credit for you writing ability.

4088712 Hahaha. Have you never looked at something with the eyes of a creator? All you can see are flaws, and it tears you apart to know that it comes from you.

4088740 I suppose so... I always feel my writing is crappy until it feels perfect. One of the reasons I haven't written on the site yet.

4088769 Yeah, I understand that. Hey, a heads up; in a few day's I'll be posting a new story. It's a Spike ship, but with who, I'm not telling.

4088779 sounds cool. I'll check it.

This looks very interesting, I look forward to future chapters.

4265494 Working in it now... you know, it's a pain trying to write in second person... But it will be soon.

This is good I hope I get to read more.

4489307 You will. It's on hiatus, not cancelled.

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