Some people believe that every human has the right to a second chance. A chance to roll the dice once more so we may continue our life happily and "normal". Too bad my roll was snake eyes. One moment I'm driving off to do some other meaningless thing in my life. The next moment I find myself stranded in a world full of multicolored horses that can talk. I'm sure you've heard many stories like this before, better ones probably. But take a moment to sit back, relax, and enjoy the tale of what I consider... My Second Chance.
Note: This takes place in a universe where My Little Pony never existed.
Chapters (7)
An interesting story/chapter. I'll have to watch to see where it goes but it seems to have promise. One suggestion I would like to give is to use, in brackets, hr. This creates a dividing line that auto-sizes no matter what size window you're using or what device you're reading it on. Just a suggestion though.
3792023 Hey! Thanks for the tip.
3792065 no problem.
its very good
this is really interesting history is espectacular, sorry for ask you continue with this history
PD: sorry for my bad gramma
This story's really interesting. I'm liking the MC and I loved the scene with the kids. The characters are pretty rounded so far and the flowers in this chapter were marvelous! I really like the Luna's Blessing. There should be one for Discord too! mlp.bartstuff.eu/mlp-slick.png One besides Poison Joke.
There are a few mistakes I could see in this story, but not too many.
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"There should be one for Discord too!"
You'll just have to keep on reading to find out.
I decided to add an adventure tag to the story. If I tell you why, it might spoil the other chapters for you.
I'm liking it. Now I'm more than a bit intrigued. What made you make the character have Asperger's Syndrome?
3809898 Would you like me to tell you in a message? Or keep it a mystery and just leave it at "iunno."
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It's one I can truthfully say that I'm really looking forward to. 
Let any of up know if you need help, okay?
Either way. I didn't think it would ruin anything about the story but if it would, never mind. The story's looking really good though.
3809988 Thanks. The only help I would need, this goes for all the other readers that see this comment too, is to tell me if I screwed something up royally that I could correct.
I blame Marmite.
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YES!!! Now not only do I feel like playing Fallout New Vegas but reading some J.R.R. Tolkien! You, my friend are awesome! Also, I really liked this chapter; it had good character development and added some depth to the story.
I'm out. not into inter species make out scenes. the romance kind of dies when one of the couple is a horse.
So... He just flopped down on a creaky floor huh? That had to have felt great!
Other than that, I'm loving this so far.
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I did NOT see that, this is why I got a proof reader by the 3rd chapter and not do it all by myself. Thanks for pointing out that royal screw up 
I love this kinda thing.
Love,love,love this story
its always funny always entertaining just great
Still a fan of it so far. I actually just started playing League of Legends I mostly play as Dr. Mundo. Great battle in this one too! Oh, also, Anne can be fun to play as also. I like summoning Tibbers!
Those ending paragraphs looked awfully familiar, hmm?
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This story... Need more to devour