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Freewing Alchemist P
Hard worikng Writer. Likes to read stories and Impove his skills. Has a strange sences of humor, don't hold it against me.
Freewing Alchemist P
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oh boy
what happen next?
This story could be better but its still plenty hilarious so it gets an upvote in my book
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4391060 I'm open to suggestions? I always want to improve.
4391075 from what i can see your pacing is a bit fast and there isnt quite enough explaination when it comes to events. My advice is to find a good editor who also happens to be a decent writer as well (unlike me who has only helped write complete non-sense lol)
4391130 Thanks for the advice.
well, hat itrastiy also wha f the evil vilien fd out that not the real candc sster?
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Well that's interesting what if the evil villein finds out that it's not the real cadence's sister?
Glad you asked that part will be coming up but not too soon some more crazy hijinks are yet to come.
So if you would be ever so kind to stay in tune please
MOAR!
5192637 Sorry for the wait I need to find a new proof reader/ Porto-editor so just give me a little time.
5193330 Ok, as long as there is more coming. Me gusta
5193336 Thanks.
6360947 Thanks hope you like the future chapter too.
Enjoying the story so far. Also (“Ready to get out of her Thrashion?” I asked when we were face to face.) should be "Ready to get out of here, Thrashion?"
So if they were in Equestria before and got reborn as humans somehow, could Celestia and Luna proform a memory restoration spell to restore their memories of Equestria from their past lives? Also how did they die?
Great story so far, but some spelling errors:-
"I turned to my captors, the purple dragon's big green eyes were looking me up and down them they shifted to Shining Armor."
"I turned to my captors, the purple dragon's big green eyes were looking me up and down, then they shifted to Shining Armor."
"Beside roll play is Tuesday night Shining, you know I wouldn't change that." She finished with a giggle."
"Besides role play is Tuesday night Shining, you know I wouldn't change that." She finished with a giggle.
"Ah, what ever little dude. I'm just glad everything turned out OK. Still, that thing was a predator, right? That was thing good at hunting, but what was it hunting? Was it after Thrashion?"
"That was something good at hunting, but what was it hunting? Was it after Thrashion?"
"While it is true that he just saved your wife and he did not mean any harm… Captain Shining Armor if you feel safer, then you my restrain him. He did break out of your magic restraints." Celestia finished.
"While it is true that he just saved your wife and he did not mean any harm… Captain Shining Armor if you feel safer, then you may restrain him."
Aww man, I would have loved to read the sex parts. 😭
Poor dude, he didn't do anything so he's still a virgin and Shining still wants to kill him.
Poor Spooky didn't do anything with Astral Glow and Shining is still trying to kill him.
Hoping that you continue this some time soon .