Set in the Villainous universe by CrypticMetaphor
Jasper was just some kid off the street. Not even at the minimum drinking age (USA). So where did he get the idea to enslave Equestria? Doing this not only angered all of Equestria but angered a higher power. Now God has sent an angel to bring Jasper to be judged. Only problem is the angel, Jim, has no idea what he's going against and in his haste God may have made the wrong decision. It's up to Jim if he'll be able to fulfill God's wishes or become a puppet on the string of Jasper's tennis shoe.
Chapters (3)
So I know this will make me sound like a doushe but. FIRST!
Anyways hope you enjoy this.
Also I would like to apologize for posting in the wrong folder and then posting the wrong story. That's my fault for annoying your feed with a sudden influx of stories. Again I'm really sorry.
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I love your comments.
3722355 Dude, you're taking someone else's idea and trying to use it for yourself, I would like to think that you at least talked to Crypticmetaphor before doing this. And to quote Rainbow Dash 55
3724807 lol thx
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You realize cryptic metaphor has a whole group dedicated to writing fanfics of his own work right? Check out the Villainous fan group and I did mention to him I was working on a story. And if people think that's what I'm doing then I apologize for not making things clearer.
So seeing that this story pretty much flopped and received a negative response from all of you. I decided to discontinue it. I thought I would be nice and do this fanfic of a fanfic thing but that has failed. I'm not too angry I'm just wondering why nobody posted any feedback. If I could have one last request, could someone please tell me what makes this fic so terrible? I'm just asking for some closure here.
Yeah the stories pretty good actually and I'd have liked to see how it turned out, I just wish you had said you were kidding about Big G being a turdburglar and that you were kidding, you know , because some people are like that .
I quite liked the story
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Well thanks for the feedback if I would have gotten some earlier then maybe I would have continued this. But it does disturb me that people were inclined to leave dislikes for such a trivial matter whether it was they hated Christianity or the idea of God as a character I don't know. I think it was obvious that it was purely for comedic effect but I guess you learn something everyday.
As to leaving dislikes, there seems to be less than likes + if you really wanna write a story, screw them its your blog. What does a dislike do to you in real life
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You're right they do nothing but I honestly think that people really are against this story since the likes and dislikes were tied for a while. I mean the first comments from another person were just emoticons and then someone's accusations. Oh well maybe I'll restart this after some time has gone by just to complete the idea. Thank you for jolting my confidence by having the courtesy to just reply.
3782549 s'wat I do. Security run up and CRUSH EM
This a funny story that is weird. I like what you wrote but it doesn't make me want to love or hate this.
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That is exactly the kind of feedback I would have wanted and if I would have continued then I bet I might have been able to pool more interest through the story I wanted to tell.
Any chance that you'll take this up again?
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Sorry but no. To tell the truth it was kind of made in a selfish effort to feed off the popularity of another story. But it flopped and I felt like I pissed some people off so I just quit while I was ahead.