This is a Story About a Pony Named

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What would happen if the ponies we know and love were forced to endure the hardships and mind-flipping experience that is the Stanley Parable? Hilarity, that's what.

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Inspired by a comic by subject number 2394.
Not meant to be taken seriously.
Rated Teen for mentions of death.

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Tephera

Tephera #1 · Jan 4th, 2014 · 3 · ·

Simply Awesome.

And especially the FlutterShy ending

TundraStanza

TundraStanza #2 · Jan 4th, 2014 · 3 · ·

"Deleted" scene (as in I just made it up on the spot):

"Derpy stepped into the broom closet, but there was nothing here," pointed out the voice, "So she immediately stepped back out and resumed the story."
But even though one of her eyes was fixated on the door, the other eye distracted itself by looking at the various items that lined the closet's wall. In fact, she turned her head this way and that way as she tried to examine the closet's contents. However, something seemed to have every item she could see glued to their individual positions. Picking up anything in the broom closet was impossible.
"Derpy Hooves stepped back into the hallway and continued the story," reiterated the voice.
Coincidentally, the broom closet door chose that particular moment to shut. Naturally, Derpy assumed that she was now locked in because all of the other doors that closed behind her automatically prevented her from going back the way she came. Meanwhile, the voice was still adamantly pointing out how pointless this particular room was and how it really didn't have any part in the story. The voice even went so far as to mock anybody that found the "broom closet ending". It was at this time that the voice came to the most logical conclusion.
"Hello!" it called, "This pony is dead! Please remove this pony's body from the premises and proceed to bring a new pony into the game, provided that they properly and fully understand the finer nuances of an interactive, role-playing game!"
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Clockwork opened the door and entered the hallway.
"Ah, Pony Two, welcome to the Clockwork Parable," said the voice warmly, "I highly doubt you can do any worse than the first pony."
Clockwork turned around. "Hm, what's this? 'Broom Closet'? Well, I suppose it couldn't hurt to find some extras for my current inventory, would it?" He opened the door and stepped into the closet.
"You too?" asked the voice incredulously. "Unbelievable. Please send me a more intelligent species next time. A monkey, perhaps? A cat? I'd even settle for a goldfish at this point. I won't discriminate."
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"Dinky left the meeting room and headed for her boss's office," directed the voice.
Dinky walked out of the office when she noticed another door in front of her. It had the words "Broom" and "Closet" in bold letters written on it. The strangest part, however, was the fact that it was covered in wooden boards that had nails in them just outside the width of the doorway.
"No, we're not going through that again," said the voice dismissively, "Please just carry on with the story."
Confused, but not arguing, Dinky proceeded on to the staircase.

Serefin

Serefin #3 · Jan 4th, 2014 · · ·

3730884 'Clockwork'?

I smell OC...

TundraStanza

TundraStanza #4 · Jan 4th, 2014 · · ·

3731796 , Well... Clockwork, Time Turner, John Stallion...
Honestly, there are so many alternate takes of the Doctor's interaction with the MLP-verse that I can't keep up with what his name is anymore.
*shrugs*

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