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FoughtDragon01


If I'm not writing pone, I'm drawing pone. If I'm not drawing pone, I'm writing pone. This is my life now. Pone.

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A world without chaos.

Such a place sounds absolutely lovely on paper, does it not? No unplanned events, no unexpected inconveniences, no unpredictability. Everything that a pony plans, they'll be able to do without being so much as a minute behind schedule. Surely, for ponies like Twilight, the ones that live and breathe off of organization, that kind of world sounds absolutely perfect for her. However, when chaos actually does disappear due to... things, it becomes very clear to her, and the rest of Equestria, that such a world is not an ideal one. In fact, it's grossly boring.

Fortunately—or unfortunately—there just so happens to be a lovely spirit of chaos who knows exactly what to do: Simply bring the chaos back. Of course, since he himself lacks his chaotic power, he'll need some help from a certain begrudging purple alicorn.

What could possibly go wrong? Neither of them know. After all, what's chaos without a bit of unpredictability?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

you got me this is really funny :rainbowlaugh:
Poor Pinkie :pinkiegasp: she would hate a world with out chaos
if fact so would Rainbow Dash :rainbowderp: no more competitions every pony get's the same result
Rarity :raritycry: fashion all the same never changing :raritydespair:
Applejack Might like it :applejackunsure:
Fluttershy also might like it :fluttershysad:

Well how would we know what harmonic balance was if we couldn't compare it to something chaotic? :trollestia:
Great to see another story by you!

Discord has hands?!?!?!:rainbowderp:

Wow, that monotony is, frankly, horrifying. Great concept and I love your Discord. Teeth-clenched teamwork from here on out.

Very promising. Hope you'll keep at it and that you can deliver on the quality these first chapter promise.

Lastly, that is the most epic arm-wrestling I've ever read or seen. Awesome.

I'm sorry, but there is waaaaay to much explaining going on in this story. While I understand what's going on, there is not enough talking, or interaction between characters. Just a bunch of big and complicated words. You have a very vast vocabulary, and you english is very good, but your story kind of put me to sleep. I literally skipped through a bunch of paragraphs, and I got so bored, that even when I was reading and trying to pay attention, I just got lost because of so many complicated explanations. The lines started to become, literally just a long line. It's probably just me though...cause I understand what the story is talking about and I understand every word, it's just too boring for me too handle...

Twilight... just go with it:ajbemused: there is no other way, I hate the sound of this as much as you do... but, just go with it...
Good story, I can't wait to see what happens next!:twilightsmile:
who knows? Maybe Twilight will like being Discords "apprentice" :trollestia:

...You know,The funny thing is,Im able to understand Twi and Dissy's viewpoints.......Chalk it up to being both order and chaos depending on the situation......Basically,True chaos.......Also....I love the premise for this story....

The Seal of being a Dead Fic goes to... this.

A trashcan flew through her window

I was hping for a chair lol but a trashcan will work :rainbowlaugh:

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