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Old Ben Kenobi


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We all saw the Alicorn Amulet, but how was it made? Who created it?This story aims to find out.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 11 )

Wow I can't wait to read the next chapter!

3575630>>3575903>>3587967 Thank you for the positive feedback!:twilightsmile: I may not be able to update this for a while, but I will finish this fanfic eventually!

You know, this story has been getting progressively better.... Really it has.
I first started readin it and only continued along because I figured, "I started, I must finish... No going back now...."
But now, "Hmm... I wonder where it'll go from here?"
I genuinely like this story now...
Congratulations, I've never had the pleasure of reading a story and watching it evolve before my very eyes.....
And I've read a LOT of them.....
Here, have a moustasche.... Or seven.... Ok, you get eleven....
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

4067353 Thank you very much for your feedback! I guess the reason the story gets more engaging is that, at the start, I only really had a rough idea of what I was going to do. The story and premise was there, but the more I explored it, the more the story began to write itself, if that makes any sense. Anyway, I'm really glad that you like it, and I hope the end chapter does not disappoint. :pinkiehappy:

4067623 It makes more sense than you think... We don't write the stories... We merely begin their record... Like a scribe with a quill being fed the secrets of another world entirely....
We don't write stories.... We only gaze into their universe....

I don't think you could dissappoint with the end chapter, so long as you make a bit more lengthy than the rest....

I rather liked this ending....

4091643 thanks. The epilogue or the end chapter?

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