Shane has long held the bronies in contempt but now he finds himself in equestria. Will his sanity hold up? Can he find his way home? What will his adventures teach him?
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Blackchibisan
I be das let's player and a long time Fanfiction.net member. I am an awesomely chill dude and am what one might call a Moderate Brony.
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Meh, the cover art said it all, it's another one of these awfull Gary Stu Alicorn OC stories, nothing original, same old bland clichés, plotholes and characters as usual.
EDIT : only positive point is the lenght of the chapters, it's long enough to allow you to describe things or build interractions and world. Too bad, the originality don't follow at all.
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The point was not to be an Alicorn so much as an objective look at the universe from the perspective of someone who hated the series. It is more to be a fair analysis than an actual Gary Stu. If you read the whole thing you might have actually realized this as the character perpetually hates to be an Alicorn specifically because of judgements like this one. I don't mean to be rude but I do find your comment to be very very ironic given the entire purpose of the fic. ^_^
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See my reply to Cat, again, the irony. You guys suck at paying attention to the character and overall reactions. Unless your sarcastic comment was meant for serious in which case, thank you... but since you answered in picture form I am thinking that this is more suitable.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KaqC5FnvAEc
cool!
another chapter please?
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Sadly, this story is over, but I plan on making another in the series. This is going to stay as is because it was an objective look at the series from a perspective I once held. I liked the character so much that I have been kicking around Ideas for a sequel for awhile.
3546990 if there's an alicorn OC in the picture then people won't read it, they'll automatically assume that it's a self insert Gary Stu and downvote it.
especially if it's the same OC as your avatar...
3550509
Wow... That's very close-minded. Is that one of those better safe than sorry things?
I'm not changing the cover. It has been that way since I first gave it a cover and I stand by it. Anypony who wants to assume I'm some idiot trying to be the best can bite me.
That being said, thanks for the heads up.
3550565
eh, i don't rightly know.
but, personally, i've had a bad experience with Alicorn OC fics.
also, you'd recieve a litteral fuck-ton of downvotes if your OC would have been black and red.
never use black and red in your colour schemes
3550574
I don't use red. Orange from time to time but only as an accent color. Look, I chose black because it's the color I most commonly wear and I am blonde. It just seemed to make sense.
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3546997
You must be superior in mental faculties. Teach us, oh great one, about your faggotry.
3552698
Hmmmm, not sure if trolling because of low IQ or peer pressure.
3552738
Low IQ, eh? You certainly are one with the faglord.
3552746
Ah, I see the recycled Fag Insults are strong with this one. This requires a very well thought out reply....
Your mother is a faglord. Ah, yes, that shall suffice for someone of your towering intellect
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Funny you should say I have a towering intellect when you are yourself trying to be better than everyone else, and saying they just don't understand you, because they're stupid. I'm just calling you what you are, which is a Faglord.
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If you have been paying attention, I am just tired of people who can't give constructive, specific, criticism. Calling me a Faglord doesn't help anything and just makes me less likely to treat you with respect. It isn't based on anything other than insulting me. Try forming actual advice instead of assuming anyone that calls your intellect into question based on your comments is some form of bland stupid insult that you couldn't be bothered to come up with a better one.
Put simply, act like someone who actually cares about helping your fellow writers or you get treated as a troll. Trolls are lesser beings and will be treated as such. I have dealt with bulling of myself and a lot of people I know and I don't take kindly to it. Be constructive. It is a simple request. If you aren't, I will treat you like an idiot. I am sorry for being rude but it is true.
This fic is
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and furthermore, you should
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Hmmmmm... May I suggest that you try looking into the point of a fic as opposed to assuming that any story involving an alicorn is immediately flawed. If you can reply with the intention this fic had accurately then perhaps I will take you seriously. If not, shut the buck up.
*Trying not to assume all assholes are trolls*
3555533 dude, quit while you're ahead. i read this story, and i found it absolutely terrible, and the Alicorn OC adds a whole new level of awful to it.
3555993
You didn't answer the challenge. If you can then I will accept you as a sane person. If not, ST... BU.
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I just roll my eyes at this point. I stopped roughly 5 years ago from posting things on boards that were too public because people believe their opinions make or break a world and that breaking down another instead of attempting to let them reach their level through helpful advice is the only way to express an opinion.
3556179 what challenge. you're just throwing red herrings at me. just recognise that this story is bad and learn from it
3556302
I asked you to post the point of this fic. That was my challenge. Meet it and I will know that you didn't ignore the entire point of this fic. If you didn't ignore the point, then your arguement will have merit. If you did, then your point is meaningless.
3556420 you know what, it's your own plan to be a petulant little child who lives in denial. fine
if you want to learn nothing. fine
just know this: you will recieve hatred by the boatload if you don't learn your mistakes here.
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I am not denying this isn't a masterpiece. I am not trying to avoid growing. I am just sick of people bringing up the Alicorn OC without actually paying attention to the irony of that in context to the character himself. If you missed the point of the fic, that is your issue. I hammered it out as I went a long time ago and have grown much since. I left it as is because I feel the point made in the fic still stands.
I just wanted to confirm that unlike the judgemental assholes I have met on this site, you are being sincere but your dodging that challenge does not help your case. If you read it, I am not asking much to ask you what was the point of the fic is. It is a simple request, not a childish temper tantrum. I am being serious here and dodging my challenge does not lend anything to your argument.
I like the idea (Hate the ending) but pacing was to fast and cliches was everywhere. I can help you work on it if you want.
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I think you mean "readers and reviewers who want better writing than this shitpile of a fic" rather than judgmental assholes.
Alright, what the fuck is up this autistic piece of shit you've slapped a title on and fucking DARED to call a story? The plot is stupid, and grammatical mistakes are ON THE FIRST FUCKING SENTENCE.
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In his defense, your grammar is lacking as well... Oh, and please, if you are going to rip something up one side and down the other, be more specific and strike at exactly why their writing doesn't work. It makes your stance far more dependable as you watch them cry.