Another Story where a human enters Equestria

by insert uncreative name

Bloopers

This is not the latest chapter
The previous chapter should be the latest chapter.

bloppers is always moved to the end of the story.

Another Story Where a Human Enters Equestria: Bloopers,
The grammical and other errors that we found rather funny, we decided to record them instead of just get rid of them.
Will be updated as we go along.

Chapter 12

I had been left to suffer alone. and oh man was I, the Grand Reaper – The way this sentence is written it implies that Martian is the Grand Reaper Spoiler alert! Joking he's not really but it is a funny coincidence considering the chapter before this one.

“Umm okay, but why Zecora's my house?” asked Fluttershy.
Proofreader: Yes,why is Zecora fluttershy's house?
Writer: I don't know ask her.

As she did so she started to start
Proofreader: so Fluttershy has to start, before she can start... what?

Chapter 13
(not much this time...sorry)

“But you leg.” Fluttershy said.
Proofreader: how do you 'Leg'?
Writer: I was at the time
Proofreader: ….......I don't wanna know...
Writer: well you're doing it right now

Oops look like was a mine too.
Proofreader: Look like was a mine?! Since when? He seemed like a normal guy to me!
Writer: The mine, oh it was quite divine.

Chapter 14

As soon as she did this Angle got down from whatever hiding place he was in and waited at the door. As soon as Fluttershy left again Angle shut and locked the door
Proofreader: Fluttershy takes care of triangles too?
Writer : This mistake is a lot more ironic if you've seen the movie 'Hot Fuzz'. And I did it twice which is worse.

Said Fluttershy as she finely left.
Proofreader: She can have so much grace sometimes, even when you can't see her.

“Anyway Zecora had offered me the chance to watch a piratical demonstration of medicine making,
Proofreader:... So Zecora knows how to make medicine like a pirate?...okie-dokie-lokie...

I garbed a cane Fluttershy had made fore my to walk with
Writer: I cannot grammar today, I'm too busy not grammaring

No that not what I was expecting
Proofreader: Oh no! Martin's turned into a caveman! D:
Writer: Amazing what an apostrophe 's' (or lack of) can do.

Chapter 15

To which Rarity replied “No I serious,
Proofreader:...I serious, therefore I am.
Writer:... very yes.

“Darling you honestly believe that I that much fabric laying around.” Rarity said.
Proofreader:...Rarity has terrible grammar in this chapter.
Writer: That much that I do.

Well this is an interesting devilment.
Proofreader: I have nothing to say to this.
Writer: Devilment – reckless mischief; wild spirits. Just thought you should know

All our heroins had left to do is tell Rarity to be in the lookout.
Proofreader: hmmm, that doesn't look right... let me google it
one google later
Heroin
Not to be confused with Heroine
Writer: Yes, that would be important.

Chapter 16

No overly funny mistakes this time around sorry.

Chapter 17

Meet me there as soon as possible.” instructed Celestia. She telephoned straight to the labs without waiting for a response.
Proofreader: yes, she just grabbed her handy cellphone and called herself into the lab.
Writer: Actually she crawled through the phone to get to the lab. Pretty creative huh?

We then hers he sound of clanging armor coming from outside the room
proofreader: I don't even know how to react to this other than sl

Comments

[lolz anonymous]

lol that shit made me laugh!!!! you guys should work on a comedy routine.

also that last chapter was pretty interesting, i wounder what the future has in store for are protagonist??

[Nightmare Daniell61]

Can we pwease get more? i want more D: you have a week op.

[insert uncreative name]

2803400
I'm trying to work on the next chapter, but I'm having difficulties finding time, inspiration, and motivation. I am sorry to say that progress is slow.

[Nightmare Daniell61]

2803423

At least you take the time to awnser :)

But if you need a proof reader i can probably help you since i am finishing up most of my school! (duel enrollment is awesome but sucks )

[insert uncreative name]

2839443
Well I'm more or less finished with this story. I have loaded up the final chapter not to long ago. With how busy my life has been lately I'm probably not going to be starting on another story, so I wont be needing a proofreader but thanks for offering.

[Nightmare Daniell61]

2846341

The chapter hasnt loaded online yet D:

Also this story i found is amazing(RATED M AND NSFW)

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/27691/1/dancing-flames-cooling-ember/chapter-six-i-guess-dogs-are-a-persons-best-friend

Chapter four listen to this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2B4c7xqtjfg#start=0:00;end=6:51;autoreplay=true;showoptions=false

You will not regret it...human turned dragon in equestria would be the tldr :)

[insert uncreative name]

2846832
Sorry it took me so long to reply I didn't have access to my computer. I can't figure out why chapter 18 isn't showing up for you if it helps here's the link
FimFiction- Chapter 18

and If that doesn't work try this link for fanfiction.net
FanFiction- Chapter 18

Hopefully one of those links will work

[PantheraLeo]

I wanted to say that this story is utterly terrible. Your grammar is ... practically non-existent, your writing is sloppy and your keeping of plot-line is just ... eh.

BUT then I took chapter 6 to my eye and since then I have not stopped laughing till the end. This story is definitely worth reading.

I must say that you have probably achieved exactly what was intended with this story. It is light reading, it is funny and it just successfully entertains the reader ... so ... thanks for writing this awesome funny story!

[insert uncreative name]

6472139 Thank you.

I have seen one other story use the same concept, but I can't remember for the life of me what it was.

[DerpTape]

All that story and desert too, aww you shouldn't have