Another Story where a human enters Equestria

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Bloopers

Another Story Where a Human Enters Equestria: Bloopers,
The grammical and other errors that we found rather funny, we decided to record them instead of just get rid of them.
Will be updated as we go along.

I had been left to suffer alone. and oh man was I, the Grand Reaper – The way this sentence is written it implies that Martian is the Grand Reaper Spoiler alert! Joking he's not really but it is a funny coincidence considering the chapter before this one.

“Umm okay, but why Zecora's my house?” asked Fluttershy.
Proofreader: Yes,why is Zecora fluttershy's house?
Writer: I don't know ask her.

As she did so she started to start
Proofreader: so Fluttershy has to start, before she can start... what?

“But you leg.” Fluttershy said.
Proofreader: how do you 'Leg'?
Writer: I was at the time
Proofreader: ….......I don't wanna know...
Writer: well you're doing it right now

Oops look like was a mine too.
Proofreader: Look like was a mine?! Since when? He seemed like a normal guy to me!
Writer: The mine, oh it was quite divine.

As soon as she did this Angle got down from whatever hiding place he was in and waited at the door. As soon as Fluttershy left again Angle shut and locked the door
Proofreader: Fluttershy takes care of triangles too?
Writer : This mistake is a lot more ironic if you've seen the movie 'Hot Fuzz'. And I did it twice which is worse.
Said Fluttershy as she finely left.
Proofreader: She can have so much grace sometimes, even when you can't see her.
“Anyway Zecora had offered me the chance to watch a piratical demonstration of medicine making,
Proofreader:... So Zecora knows how to make medicine like a pirate?...okie-dokie-lokie...
I garbed a cane Fluttershy had made fore my to walk with
Writer: I cannot grammar today, I'm too busy not grammaring
No that not what I was expecting
Proofreader: Oh no! Martin's turned into a caveman! D:
Writer: Amazing what an apostrophe 's' (or lack of) can do.

To which Rarity replied “No I serious,
Proofreader:...I serious, therefore I am.
Writer:... very yes.
“Darling you honestly believe that I that much fabric laying around.” Rarity said.
Proofreader:...Rarity has terrible grammar in this chapter.
Writer: That much that I do.
Well this is an interesting devilment.
Proofreader: I have nothing to say to this.
Writer: Devilment – reckless mischief; wild spirits. Just thought you should know
All our heroins had left to do is tell Rarity to be in the lookout.
Proofreader: hmmm, that doesn't look right... let me google it
one google later
Heroin
Not to be confused with Heroine
Writer: Yes, that would be important.

Meet me there as soon as possible.” instructed Celestia. She telephoned straight to the labs without waiting for a response.
Proofreader: yes, she just grabbed her handy cellphone and called herself into the lab.
Writer: Actually she crawled through the phone to get to the lab. Pretty creative huh?

We then hers he sound of clanging armor coming from outside the room
proofreader: I don't even know how to react to this other than sl