A HIE story that's a competition between Aiet and I
A long dormant evil is awakening in the wonderful land of Equestria ready to rain terror on its inhabitants. But first this evil needs to raise an army, but the creatures it needs have been banished and sent to another dimension.
One brony, a antique truck, a shotgun, and a haunted highway. Nothing could possibly go wrong with this setting. Until something does, and the lone brony finds himself in a equestria totally different from the one he is familiar with. And now he must figure out how he was brought here and why.
Tags subject to change as story progresses. Highly recommended you read Aiets story "Meason dies at the end" as it is the other part of this competition
Chapters (10)
I like it! please continue
You had my curiosity now you have my attention.
Heh, the title reminds me of the indie movie, John Dies at the End. That was actually a pretty good movie.
Remember to look over your work with excrutiating detail.
Excellent first chapter! A few grammar errors sure but a very interesting story to boot. You have my favor and like.
hm continue
Sounds good. Please continue.
Oh man, poor Travis.
By the way, how is he going to repair the truck?
3916302 good old fashion elbow grease and a random glass maker
Awesome
Travis is suffering so much.
After having his truck destroyed , almost losing his life, being scolded because of screaming at someone from anger, he snapped and cried himself to sleep. And to top it all off, only Twilight was nice to him after everything.
Poor guy needs some time alone.
sweet story, hope to see more
To all of you following this story there will be instances you wont understand if you don't read my friend Aiets story Meason dies at the end. Plus its a pretty good story in my opinion so you should defiantly check it out.
Yes this is nice
very nice
I like it. Not really sure where you're going with it plot wise. Romance wise there is the thing with Twilight, maybe Luna. If you throw a relationship with Queen Chrysalis in there you will have my full support.
Hot damn you're alive! Nice chapter. The whole confrontation was written beautifully. Can't wait for what happens next. Would love to see something between him and Queen Chrysalis just to spite Celestia.
WHO DOESN'T LOVE STEAK! Steak is the best kind of meat (second from beacon) there is in the u.s
6914283 I second that!!!!!!!