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Mist Shaker
Hi, I'm Mist, just your average American guy, but I live out many of my psychotic fantasies in my works. So... now you know about me... let's know more about you.
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I thought this was a the last of us crossover.
3480827 me to man
3480827>>3481418 hey guys sorry for the confusion, I have adjusted the title and therefore should have better results the next chapter will be out sooner or later if me and Ascending Anthem can get it done before I start my new job at amazon.
3481839 hey I know I mentioned this earlier but I do apologize for not getting to the title before submitting.
Keep going this is good!
3483914 thank you, I appreciate your support and will do my best to provide more for this, as we will have more... action... in the later chapters.
When will next episode be? I am loving it so far...
3487702 Soon, my friend, soon, I know the waiting is killing you but we will have the next chapter done soon.
3487702 I now present chapter two of The Fall Of Equestria.
I really like how its going, but you need to work on the pacing.
The development is great with Mist Shaker (probably because of self insert) but the way Mountain and AJ just got there, went in, got out, it just didn't flow right. Also this is probably just my inner writer speaking out but... WHY ARE THEY KISSING NOW!!! LET THE PLOT DETERMINE THAT! IT DIDN'T HAVE TO HAPPEN LIKE THAT!!!1!!!!1
3516434 well we didn't really intend for it to happen so soon but desperate times call for desperate measures and besides the two that kissed kinda already had a crush on one another before this even started.
is there more?
3520357 oh there will be more, I just started my new job and I have to go in tonight for the first night of work so I will only be working on the next chapter with Ascending Anthem on my days off.
Zis is good: Jackson
but I need to ask is this going to be a story: Jackie
I would like if it were a story: Jacqueline
You know, whenever I put in a reference like this, nobody gets it.
Anyways, good job to the both of you. I hope you are having fun at Amazon. Good luck!
3596817 I thought I would have fun there but I'm not.
Good chapter! Here's a like to make it over half way
3616254 I can tell you one thing, the end of the road is a long ways off.
I honestly thin that the confessions of love came off a little bit rushed and/or forced, but considering the situation horomones and emotions are going to be all over the place, so its hard to say. *shrug*
Anywhoodle, here's to hoping a bit of actual plot development happens now that the characters and the relationships they've just started are established.
3744028 Thank you for pointing that out, I will see to it that we have more length in the confessions of other characters that will be in the story as well, and don't worry I still have your submission in the files if you are wondering, I just haven't went over them with Ascending Anthem yet.
I got a little confused when the breaks were supposed to be
3791639 I expected as much, I'll go in and fix those.
3790848
*chuckles* Worry? I really don't care if he gets featured at all if you can't find a use for him, I'm just trying to help you improve the story in the future. Collabs can be hard (currently working on one with a friend, actually) and sometimes some friendly reader advice can really help in the long run.
Which is why I like commenting on up and comming stories. ^^
Anyway, gonna jump into chapter four inabit, I'll comment if I've got anything useful to say afterwords.
Lotsa run-on sentences in this one, along with awkward wording.
Edit: Aaaand now its gone.
What about Applesnack?
In exactly what line did you see this, I looked through and did not find such an error.
Cant wait for the next chapter guys. Keep up the fantastic work!
What Could it possibly be? Anyway great work as always, cant wait for the next! Ciao
IT LIVES!
This was in my favorites bin for some time and today I read just a few chapters out of curiosity and was impressed. Very nice work it could use a little refinement (some minor spelling issues) but still a good story all the while. But if it has a happy ending I'm thumbing it down Disney ruined happily ever after for me. In fact they ruined everything....
So far I like this. Cant wait to read more.
4978809 I can't promise a sad ending, seeing as I specialize in happy endings but I know how to make some really bad things happen before a happy ending, I hope that the bad things can compensate, or I can write an alternate ending specific for those that don't like happy endings. I dunno, I'll figure it out either way.
4980189 Hey, I'll be getting Ch. 8 out as soon as I possibly can, I can't make any guarantees though that it will be as soon as some would hope.
4978567 It is your enthusiasm and support that drives me to keep going, as is the support of all readers that find this fic and any of my other fics entertaining.
3523125 Hey Mike, when is this gonna be done? Because I really like what I read.
5316278 Oh, right sorry, I've only broken a couple of writer's blocks, I will have this one figured out soon though, it will be harder to get this done with just me working on the fic.
I know it has been quite some time, since I had last updated this fic, but I still haven't had any new ideas since the last update because I have been working on so many other works that it isn't even funny, so give me time and I promise, I will have an update when things get settled down.
Attention all whom have given me access to their OC's, I have unfortunately lost all descriptions of the characters given access to and am in dire straits just thinking about the characters and their information, so please, re-submit if you can.
It would be nice if you put the link to the next story here.
7331244 It's not finished yet, give me time.
To all whom have enjoyed my work thus far.
I apologize for my lack of work on this fic, as I have been busy with rl stuff since the last chapter was posted, I will try to get some work done soon.