this story is about abuse and bullying, it shows the behavior that abusive parents, and friends that give them the wrong influence, can invoke upon people, and what that behavior, invoked upon them, can do to others, and how that effect can cause their actions to backfire on them, even when it comes to a victim ending their own life because of what was done to them.
how would you act if you saw someone getting bullied in school or anywhere at all?
WARNING: rated teen for use of terms
I am not using any one else's character, for the simple fact that I felt no need to use names hence the reason for the OC and Other tags.
this subject has been gnawing at me ever since I have thought of it so, I just want to get it out of the way.
this is not a true story, none of this has ever happened to me. So if you wonder why i wrote this, it is for the ones that need to know that there are people that care and can be helped if they can do the right thing and talk to someone before someone gets hurt or worse commits suicide, because I don't want that to happen.
This was a very good story overall, there are just a few minor changes that I would recommend, mainly in terms of spelling errors, but overall it was very good. Do you by any chance have an editor? I'm glad that it had a happy ending (unlike mine). Oddly enough this story which my story reminded you of reminds me of another story that was very similar that an old teacher of mine once told me, I love when stories can do that. Anyway, I digress, great job on the story!
3483086 thank you, I wrote this for the sole purpose of allowing it to serve as a reminder that people can change, no matter who they were before and even if it is the consequence of their actions that cause the change it is still a change none the less but it also speaks out against bullying in a manner that I never thought I could produce until I wrote this, and yes, while there are some errors I am going to leave it as is due to what it means to me, but I also wrote this because of what a friend had told me when this happened when a friend of his... did the unthinkable, I could tell he was heartbroken when he found out but he refused to openly share his emotion, so I pressed no further after finding out what had happened, I only tried to comfort him, even though we were in school, the best I could after hearing everything he had to say.
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Sounds like you're a very good friend. It can be tough, but it is always important to realize that things do get better. I'm glad you were able to show that in this story. It's always a shame when good stories like this don't get the recognition that they deserve.
I get not wanting to do any edits for the sake of having an unedited work, I've done this before myself. If you do however find yourself in need of an editor feel free to look me up.
3491267 Speaking of which I am working on a collab project going on, I will fill you in once you talk to Ascending Anthem PM him to talk about editing for our project and well go from there.
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I have sent him a PM. I will PM you with any further news. Glad I (might) be able to help out!
That's fucking sad. I hate bullies, I can't stand them, I'm fair sure I would beat up a bully who Is trying to beat up someone else. JUSTICE SHALL BE SWIFT!
3491921 I would do just about anything to stop bullying altogether, I wrote this to draw the line of realization.
3491923 Yeah dude no shit, if I saw someone being bullied I'd snap. I was bullied for years and I hated it, don't want others to go through what I did
Nice story, it really hits home
3580000 Thank you, it really means a lot to me. I will try to get more good fics out when I can.
3582011 okie dokie lokie
Hey Zank, it's me Phillip. I just wanted to say this was really good, Infact I give it a score of
4312221 Thank you, I'm so glad that you liked it. Tell me, what was the most meaningful part of the story to you?