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Mist Shaker
Hi, I'm Mist, just your average American guy, but I live out many of my psychotic fantasies in my works. So... now you know about me... let's know more about you.
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It feels a lot like you just rushed the events of this chapter in order to introduce your OC to the entirety of the Mane Six as quickly as possible. There's nothing wrong with writing a few chapters of exposition first!
well, this time it was actually intended to happen like that but in the next chapter will be I little more relaxed in terms of pace, I just wanted the Introductions to happen quickly while still giving a bit of space for certain events but the thing is the oc hasn't been introduced to all of the characters intended.
nope will not accept this its unacceptable!!!! (puts gun to head and pulls trigger) jk not dead but really man why did you have to be so indepth man really
sometimes depth is key to a good story even a good story w/ clop, yeah I may have went too deep but my mind just wouldn't stop digging for more until it was satisfied.
3485514 I'm working on another fic called The Fall Of Equestria it's actually a great fic I tell ya, i really recommend it if you like reading grimdark and such
3485529 I know ive been reading it man then I saw this and was like "looks cool chapter one is ok now for chapter 2 oh looks like the main guy is going to be saved by rarity ok wait she did what now no just no" and I went to read other stories but I might finish reading the rest later on thought
3485756 well maybe I should change that chapter name to make it make more sense.
3491914 hey now this is just to test my abilities and practice so that I can get better and make my work better, I don't mean to sound offended but I am speaking the truth..
3485756 chapter 3 is up if you want to read it now and the title of chapter two has been fixed.
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good good i look forward to more
3510303 there will be more in time but with me starting me at Amazon in 3 days I won't be able to get it out as soon as I had hoped.
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Alright well do what you need to do first
i'm sure we can all be patient for ya!
good chapter no stuff to make me shiver like last time I mean it man but all in all its a good story i'll probably read it when you keep updating it man so keep up the good work
3517476 I am about to finish Chapter 4 called 'A new beginning, a hot night' and it is going to be a wild ride and yes the ahem... nighttime fun will be more than wild, if you know what I mean.
3596229 yep I get what you mean and I will still read it man its a good story man so yep going to read it don't care home much sex and stuffs is in it, it's a good story
Hey guys, sorry if I've been keeping you waiting on this one it's just that I haven't had any ideas for the current scene I'm trying to work on but I will do my very best to get something done.
Oh wow! I just turned on my mature content thing and whata y'know Mist Shaker has a new story I haven't seen before. This f
cking rocks!