Why is it tagged as complete ?
Will the next part be in another story or chapter ?

8241221
Thanks for catching that! It was a mistake on my part

Im liking it . Great start!

8241254
No problem. Waiting for the next chapter then.

hmm... i will be watching with great interest.

Only on this site would I find people this excited for a new chapter on a story that hasn't been touched in 3 tears.

8277305
Actually, I didn't publish this story until recently. I published the chapter in 2014 to let some of my former FIM friends read it but it kind of just got pushed back on my to do list until now.

It's a good read. Aside from just one or two instances, I saw no errors. Always good to see Luna x Chrysalis (though I initially thought they were still in Pony aesthetics so when you mentioned low skirts and breasts I had a little laugh before figuring they were Humanoid). If your interested check out my own little two shot on them that I posted on my stories.