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Dat fetish fuel.
Don't worry about that accent, unless you speak it yourself or at least hear it every day in real life you'll probley get it wrong anyway. As for fetishes and characters. Surprise me. Although, never read any with the two you mentioned above.
9/11 * 11/9 best title
3244862 This is an irrelevant comment.
Dafuq did I just read
LMAO
3244989 Did you like it?
I liked this. There were a few errors here and there, but nothing to be worried about. As for a suggestion:
Twilight and Pinkie, domination/submission please. Or anything TwiPie, really.
Ya know, with Pinkie being boss. Just a suggestion. Thanks!
New Fetish:
Long words like 'floccinaucinihilipilification' and this. <it wouldn't let me post the second one because it was over 50,000 words aka the chemical name for titan
I get hot and bothered by long words... dunno why
That is all. Equestria is ours.
Hoof licking.
Take your pick of characters.
Watersports with Spike and Twilight.
If not surprise me.
i like it! and since u ask for ideas:
hoof worship fetish featuring applejack and another mare/mares (but not rainbow dash or trixie)
mare-on-human-female sex (no rainbow dash or trixie)
sex between sweetie belle and rarity, one being slave and one being mistress (u decide which is which)
Hypnosis and or loss of fundamental control.
Memory rearrangement.
Not bad, hard to tell reality and fantasy apart though...and the last story I had trouble with the dialog...mostly the way its punctuated, maybe try different colors for different characters? I don't know...great potential, fix those and you're pretty good.
Urine with princess Luna an fluttershy :)
3250752 Getting an editor for the lesbian section... as for the other parts I'm not sure.
ass please
3253901 As for characters?
3255271
your choice. i just need some ass
Cool it with the flashbacks. They are not sexy.
i'm fine with the silly weird day flashbacks, kind of gives the fic it's own identity.
So, filly treesome orgy or what ever you like featuring Sweetie Belle and or Diamond Tiara in some lesbian tsundere/yandere action plox. Ideally Sweetie breaking DT and making her her unconditional sex pet. Magic dildo spell acquired.
But i'm ok with whatever you choose.
About the grammar, i'm ok with bad grammar, just try to separate thing a bit, else itslikewritingallasinonebigword. Separate paragraphs, when they talk, etc, so that it looks neat and easy to follow the flow.
Well I do wish these where longer. That way we could get more a feel for it really. It also seems your playing it rather close to the chest keeping them well... tame would be the best words I could come up with at the moment. Maybe try something a bit more descriptive? As for a suggestion. I have two really.
(Size Play) Scootaloo and Dash (Big Scoots and Small Dash like private toy sense preferred)
(Transform Play) Twilight and Some Pony (I'll let you have fun with that one)
Look forward to the next chapter.
I don't know why no one is mentioning this.
Why do your mare's have "Seed"?
They don't. Unless there's a cock around there somewhere that you didn't tell us about