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Bronikky
Glad of you to stop by! The name's Nikki. Loud and proud brony since 2012. Fave mane-6 character is Pinkie Pie; fave background characters are Vinyl Scratch and Octavia. Have an awesome day! /)
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this is a very nice take on a slide into madness, I hope you keep this story going
Wow...yeah this is a new side to tavi, I have seen her cruel, I have seen her in a rage, but this is a whole new side.
I feel sorry for vinyl when she gets to her
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Thank you! More to come soon!
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i look forward to it, I also look forward to see how Tavi breaks down when all of it comes crashing down on her.
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Thank you for the comment! I love dark stories too, that's why I wrote this!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! More will be up shortly
just got done with chapter four and loved it in a functionally insane sorta way
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Thank you, I'm glad to hear it
This wouldn't have anything to do with Vinyl having a white coat would it?
I think you mean "bee line," like a bee taking the shortest path back to the hive.
experienced
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Thank you for mentioning those errors, greatly appreciated.
And for the white coat, no, it has nothing to do with Vinyl's coat colour, but I can understand your assumption. Perhaps I should fix that.
This scene brought to you by PETA: Ponies Eating Tasty Animals.
3335345 It looked like foreshadowing: Vinyl's white fur/coat and the "white coat" of a straightjacket. Freaky awesome, even if it wasn't intentional.
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Oh, why thank you
3335492 You're welcome.
3335345 I'm kinda thinking you should keep the "avoiding the white coat" in. I think its really evocative that she's gotten rid of one white coat (Vinyl) and is trying to avoid another. Used correctly, it could serve as a good red herring or even a bona fide plot point. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you! Actually, with a lot of thinking I've originally decided to keep it the same anyway, but your concept suggestion really works well with how the story is going to turn out, but who knows? Maybe there will be some elaborate change in mind (even though the entire story is already mapped out)
Again, thanks
3338749 Wow. You plan way more in advance than I do. Kudos to you.
You don't have to change it if you don't want to, but I just really like the parallels that I drew from the wording.
Again, great story.
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I know, I was quite surprised myself.
I thought this story was going to be another hit-and-run, but because this was going to be my first story uploaded here I was a little hesitant, so whilst making my decision whether or not to upload, I had a lot of time to plan how I wanted it to turn out
3338788 You're doing a great job for a first work and I hope that you will write others in the future.
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But of course! And thanks a million, it really does mean a lot
im having so many what the F@#$ moments reading this but i still love it
I think you mean 'Golden Harvest always has.'
I'm confused to your phraseology here. Do you mean 'care to admit to' or 'care to discuss?"
I think you mean 'large groups of glittering.'
Great chapter, otherwise (even if you did kill Fluttershy
).
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Thank you, yet again, for addressing my mistakes! Fluttershy appreciates it
And with the "acquire to", I actually meant to write an antonym to "get involved". I don't know what's wrong with my brain
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I'm thinking that with every chapter I write, so don't worry. I'm just glad you're enjoying this
3344145 No problem. You have a great story here and I'm really enjoying it.
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I'm glad!
Oh boy...I can only imagen how Tavi and Vinyl will interact with each other now. I am feeling that it is going to get very very strange before the blood shed starts...err well starts getting worse