• Member Since 12th Jul, 2012
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Belial


Hello everyone! Call me Belial. I'm a mostly horror writer, but I also write a lot of tragedy, romance, and comedy. I know how to start a story, bu i am horrible at finishing one.

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For the first time since Luna's birth, a star has fallen. And that means someone who will change Equestria, for better or for worse unknown, has been born.

But when Celestia finds the new Alicorn, the dark aura at the starfall site warns her that this birth does not bode well.

But hidden away from all for so many years, An otherwise ordinary alicorn colt has festered and grew dark, and Celestia fears she may have created the monster she tried so hard to prevent.

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Comments ( 10 )

Quick question, why was this downvoted?

3185085 I dunno, maybe because everyone has a right to their opinion?

People don't like when an oc is more powerful or important than the main characters. And I personnaly don't like illogical stories which aren't AU.

Have to see where this one goes.

Ebony- hmmm... sounds like how Stargazer got to Los Pegasus...... A fallen star, it landed on somepony's house, i remember... She looked so adorable, that her parents urged her to live in ponyville...

I'll check and see where this goes. I'm a little curious. Just one thing: are you serious about the color scheme? He's a black and red alicorn OC. But then, I suppose I can assume you're just taking an overused trope and trying to show that it can be done right. That, or you didn't even think about it until I pointed it out just now.

3187597 I honestly didn't think about it till you pointed it out. He's just supposed to be colored like an eclipse.

I hope he doesn't get to Mary-sue-ish, haha.

I am wary to read this due to the lack of updates..


I read it and as I fear i have now clung to the story line. Celestia's so mean though :fluttercry:

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