Oh, if only Celestia knew how powerfull Razgriz really is.

Alicorn would have been better. But this ain't my story.

Nice chapter, though you need to separate the dialog. There should only be one person speaking per one.
He stole Alduin's name. Wonder if you are going to let Spike catch that?
Hope Moon is able to reclaim her alicorn status.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

LOL pinky teleport powers activate!

Start a new paragraph when someone new is talking.

3208902 well the ability to bend every living thing to your will is something best capt secret.

This story is awesome so far i look forward to the next chapter.

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as do I.

hooray, also mlp fim season 4 is coming nov 23

3209667 True

3694671 Also He is inherited form badassdery

I quite like this story great work mate I hope to see more soon

This is going to be a lot of fun reading. Like how you saved Nu Moon too.

To readers, Followers and (if any) fans,

I'm sorry. I've kept you from reading this story and updating chapters for too long. I can only say, I'm sorry.

I will not blame life, school or anyone or thing but myself for not continuing this story. I have not felt the want or desire to write further chapters and for those who are waiting and have been waiting, I'm sorry.

Sometime in the future I may pick this back up, but I'm just not up to it right now.
Thank you for your support, but I just can't keep you hanging any longer.

Razgriz0x

PS: I'm looking at re-writing this... I've decided that doing a self-insert is rather overdone and kind of arrogant. I'll probably change it to a crossover story... with what, I'm not sure right now... but the ideas are rolling around and my muse is starting to get interested again.

Until such time as I feel like it, consider this story abandoned. Once again, I'm sorry.

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