• Member Since 5th Aug, 2013
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Sidain


Just a guy that love a few things too much, drawing, videogames, music(dubstep), and now writing. Here we go

Comments ( 33 )

a bit fast and a bit too much 2d and bland play by play

3467786
Yeah I know, we're going to slow it down though.

Just let me know once you want to make a Chapter 2 :twilightsmile:

I like the story hope an update is coming for it !!!!

3513154
Oh yeah I'm working on the outline for the second chapter.

so far i am loving it please i hope you will continue

3553181
How said anything about stopping? I've just gotten started my friend.:rainbowdetermined2:

make new friends, new get jobs,

Should be: make new friends, get new jobs,

There is a typo in the description of your story. You can scare off a lot of potential reader with a mistake like this.

I would but I have the creativity of a stick and the grammar skills of a first grader

3708342
Well thanks anyway, the support helps.

so is MIa really short or all the ponies amzones?

3730651
Mia's shorter than normal, maybe just under Rainbow.

3730770 also dude i just realized she is like Edward elric from Fullmeatal

3733843
Pretty much, I didn't think any one would notice. Good job.

I've been wondering (I never read any of the reader's comments) and why did you call the people who mix technology and magic together, MECHROmancers instead of TECHNOmancers?

3744343
Because technomancer sounds dumb to me. Its just weird and I got mechromancer from a videogame that I like.

3747474
Yup, best shooter I've ever played.:moustache:

3749132 It's just that when i hear Mechromancer, I think of robots powered by a arcane resource

3749163
You know, arcane is another word for magic. Right?

3750752 I just tried to make it sound like i knew what i was talking about...heh heh:twilightsheepish:

3750814
Good try, you would have most, but I've had editors that made me look into things.

3751060 Ehh im not cut out for this stuff, maybe i should stay quiet with my ideas to myself. Sorry

3751318
Oh no, no, no I actually like talking to my readers. It helps me see what they want in the story, or what needs to be explain better. Your fine.

“Just, what happened?” Celestia asked raising an eyebrow.
“Nothing, I just owe Luna for saying she had a fat ass, that’s all.” With that, Ven continued to follow Luna, not even waiting for a response.
“Things are definitely going to get interesting.” Celestia said to herself as she followed the two and Discord, for once looking somewhat surprised, agreed with her.

. :rainbowlaugh:that's so awesome:rainbowkiss:

Oh dang, I should've added that red line of text on my story when It was being rewritten... :pinkiesad2:

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