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My name is Cameron. I am a musician, a writer, a singer, and a member of the band Bless Our Demise. My stories are mainly sad because I believe in expressing my emotions through stories...and songs.

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Dinky comes home after school to hear a new voice in her house. Dinky walks upstairs and she sees that her mothers Derpy and Rainbow Dash are holding a five year old filly.

Fanart made by a friend of mind on fimfiction named "rarityxspike" go check him out. This story is a prequel to my upcoming story about something that happened in my life. Also it will be one chapter long.

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I love it and how Dinky instantly fell in love with Package, it was so sweet. Great prequel. Can't wait for the story :twilightsmile:

It's a nice little story but there is one issue. A filly is a young female horse, if we're using the horse terms Dinky's brother Package is actually a colt.

Sorry guys, farmer brown here, here's the correct terminology for horses:
A baby horse is known as a foal
Male foal- colt
Female foal - fillie

Also... Kinda weird, dash and derpy?? I was thinking more like derpy and the doctor but whatever...

Your story, not mine

I'll fix the mistake about the colt. Derpy and Rainbow have been together for many of my stories and that's how it will stay.

I enjoyed this and am looking forward to what it is the prelude to. :twilightsmile:

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