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After Rainbow Dash finishes off the last of the Daring Do franchise Twilight suggests she make some of her own, as well as the rest of their friends. With all six competing to write the best Daring Do story who will take home the prize? More importantly will they be able to control their own natural tendencies long enough to make stories that are not only good but not doom the reader to complete mental destruction? Tune in to find out, same Daring Do time, same Daring Do page!
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This is really interesting! I love your exploration of how the ponies would approach a Daring Do writing task.
This is a great story and all, but there are just a lot of things that you've overlooked about MLP:FiM that I want to explain to you. Also, there were a few grammar and punctuation mistakes that I came across while reading, and it sort of disappointed me. (Sorry, I'm a proof reader/ editor. I can be a little fussy over small things.)
I've seen ALL of the episodes, and have gone through enough websites to know that much knowledge. (I'm such a nerd.) 
One; the MLP:FiM universe doesn't have advanced technology such as television. They have electrical cranes, but that's as close as it gets. Unless this is based in a completely different dimension, then I don't understand a thing about this concept. In the show series, they haven't shown any use for TV, and seeing how Rainbow Dash is the athletic, dare-devil type of pony, it's impossible for me to think that she sits inside cooped up all day. Plus, why would a library, aka Twilight's house, have a TV inside? librarians are supposed to convince others that TV is bad and books are good. Sounds legit... not.
Sin count: 1
Second: I noticed that you wrote cabin instead of cottage for Fluttershy.
Sin count: 2
Three: you seem to be forgetting the differences between two, to and too. Two is, of course, a number. To and too... is hard to explain. I'll do this for you instead-
The boy said "I want a go too!"
The girl wanted to go to the market.
They are both completely different things.
Sin count: 3
Sentence: to the moon!
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3113543 Okay, first and foremost. I am completely fine with editing namely cause, well... I know I'm not perfect. My favorite part of writing fanfiction is it gives me a chance to improve as I go and tends to have decent feed back, so always feel free to mention it. Now, onto things.
1. The actual technology in the series tends to vary and I don't find tv existing to be that far an impossibility(especially since they seem to have movie theatres) even if it is likely less popular than in the real world, and RD has shown herself more than willing to lounge about when it comes to Daring Do. I never intended to imply she stays inside cooped up all day just that she pretty much blew through all the Daring Do products in her excitement to absorb the franchise(something I'm sure a number of newly acquired fans to some shows can understand.)
2. Sowwy :'( I went through like five words before settling on cabin, I can't believe cottage never came to mind.
3. >.> You know too much. To and too are my hidden shame, along with any attempts to do AJ's accent v.v I'm still trying to get it right but I still have a lot of problems perfecting it so I still miss some. I used to have the same problem with they're.
3113601 Lol.
Here's a thumbs up for your story!
I enjoyed that. Very much. a fan-fiction about fan-fiction
Of course Rainbow Dash would insert herself as Prism Runner. Silly Rainbow.
Except Spike. As usual. It's kinda sad how she runs right past him and doesn't think for a split second that he might want to participate in something all his friends are doing.
3113669 Thanks ^^
3114244 Ayes, that was what made it so much fun to write. The fact Rainbow mentioned her book in season three just made it all the sweeter.
3587695 You know, I never even thought about that. I was too focused on how Spike would react to Twilight's story that I never even considered he might want to participate. Mind if i use that in the third chapter? >.>
Also, for everyone else who is reading the story. Tell me, which of the six do you identify best with when you write?
And finished! So, now that you've all had a chance to read the story, tell us! Which of the writer's do you feel best summarizes your writing experience and which story do you think should win their little contest?
Is Mr. Cobblepot a penguin, perhaps?