• Member Since 7th Oct, 2011
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Al-1701


I'm a long time pony fan with an imagination and a keyboard.

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A thousand years after the fall of Equestria and the deaths of the four princesses, what killed them and shattered the kingdom has returned. A strange creature is out to wipe ponykind off the face of the Earth. The only hope is a band of ponies driven from their homes and onto a quest to find the magical force used to forge the Elements of Harmony, but is even it powerful enough to defeat this enemy.

Disclaimer: Contains G1 MLP Characters.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 11 )

Faved and followed!
Also, first! (Sorry, couldn't resist)

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Keep going!

I have a suggestion. Spacing out paragraphs breaks up the text and makes it far easier to read. Just a friendly suggestion.

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3115399 Thanks for the suggestion. I just did that.

3115399>>3115577
If you have a fanfiction account, this can automatically be done in the document editor to perfection

Nice work! Can't wait for the next one!

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oh god one big spider would have been enough to send me fleeing! 80

smart move, I like that your realistic enough not to make everyone a hero

screw that merv old pal, entering this alliance saved your lives

Looks like our heroes have trouble on their hooves.

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