Dash was doing what she did best, spinning and diving as she flew. She didn’t have an audience today, they all had things to do, but she didn’t mind today.
Today wasn’t normal practice in front of her friends, that was more showing off, though she’d never admit that to them.
Today was for creativity. Coming up with new tricks which she could use to impress ponies, mostly her friends.
She looped a few times and with a smirk spread her legs in every direction. Cartwheeling through the air as if she’d lost control, before easily righting herself and swooping down, landing with a bright smile.
She decided on a name right there, as she always did. ‘The Windmill’
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capitalize "she"
replace the period with a colon and capitalize "the" and "windmill"
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Thank you, editing on this was done by myself only (and I'm not too good with capitalization and punctuation )
The windmill, huh? Sounds awesome.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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This is one of the best fiction concept pieces I've had the pleasure of running into for a while now.