A Lost Soul Returns: The King of Monsters

by Dark Star the Crazed

Twilight Becomes an Ambassador!

Canterlot 3 days later.

As Twilight entered the throne room she couldn't help but wonder why Celestia herself had called her to court. Yesterday she had visited Fang and he had reestablished his kingdom in the Everfree Forest. The Kingdom of Monsters Transylmaneia. That night she had a dream, or a nightmare, to be honest she wasn't completely sure. In her dream she and Fang were kissing, on a bed, with him on top of her. There was a crash and she was bleeding, the next thing she knew there was the head of a dead dragon lying next to her, Fang looked at Twilight with worry and tears in his eyes and simply said "I'm sorry that I have to do this. I didn't want you to suffer my curse my love, but if i don't then you will.... you will die." Then he bit her and her wounds started to heal, then her eyes opened. That is when the dream ended.

"Twilight!" The voice of her mentor snapped her out of her trance. When she looked up she saw that Fang, Cadence, Shining Armor, Celestia and Luna were all sitting at a table that was used when the ambassadors from the Minotaur, Griffon, Dragon, Zebra, Diamond Dog, and the more civilized parts of the Changeling kingdom gathered for a meeting in Canterlot.

When she saw Fang her cheeks heated up just thinking about him she wanted to... 'No! Naughty thoughts go away! Naughty thoughts go away! ... Must be because I'm in heat, god thing alicorns are good at controlling their actions..'. She quickly went over and took the only available seat, which was next to Fang. Twilight couldn't help but notice the two swords next to Fang. One was a Prench Rapier with the Neighponese kanji for light on the the hilt. The other was a Saddle Arabian Scimitar with the Neighponese kanji for darkness on the hilt. "Twilight!"

Once again Twilight was snapped out of her trance by Celestia. "Huh?"

Luna and Cadence giggled at her actions. Then Celestia spoke. "Twilight did you hear what I just said at all?"

"Um... no. I'm sorry Princess I was-" Twilight looked at Fang who was looking right back at her with a smile on his face. She then turned back to Celestia. "I was distracted."

The edges of Celestia's mouth turned up into a smile. "It is alright Twilight i understand young love better than you think." Twilight's cheeks lit up as Luna and Cadence burst out laughing, even Shining Armor gave a chuckle. She barley noticed but Fang also had a slight blush. After Luna and Cadence calmed down and stopped laughing Celestia continued. "Anyway I am sure you are wondering why I called you here are you not?" Twilight just nodded her cheeks finally starting to loose their blush. "Well we need an ambassador to Transylmaneia."

Twilight blinked. 'she couldn't want me to be the ambassador.... could she?'

Celestia continued. "As we are spread thin due to our negotiations with the dragon, griffon, changeling and all the other kingdoms, we simply can not be ambassadors to Transylmaneia ourselves. That is why the first government title I wish to bestow upon you, other than Princess, shall be ambassador to Transylmaneia. Do you accept this offer?"

Twilight blinked and then after deciding the princess was not joking her mind went into overdrive. 'Princess Celestia wants me to be a foreign ambassador to Transylmaneia! To... Fang's kingdom.' She felt her cheeks heat up and a smile tug at the corners of her mouth. With a sigh, she spoke. "Yes Princess I accept. This way I can learn to be more responsible. It will also allow me to learn about how the society of the monsters functions and I can probably help in keeping a war from breaking out between our kingdoms, though I doubt that would ever happen." The next thing she said was completely on accident. "Besides Fang is really cute!" Cadence started to laugh, then Luna and Celestia's eyes grew wide and Shining Armor...looked like he was ready to kill. Twilight's eyes went wide and she began to blush furiously. "I didn't mean to say that out loud!"

That is when they heard a soft chuckle form Fang. He turned and looked at Twilight, his cheeks redder than Big Mac's fur. "If it helps calm you at all... you are the most beautiful mare I have ever seen." He then kissed her lips, nearly causing her to pass out.

Shining Armor's right eye twitched and he stood up. "You will hear no complaints from me about dating my little sister. However! If you break her heart... no, if you so much as make her cry once." There was a flash and Armor was on the table glaring at Fang. "Then I will hunt you down and personally SKIN YOU ALIVE!!! DO YOU UNDERSTAND!!!!!"

Fang just smiled and nodded. "I understand but, I truly meant what I said, and you will not scare me away."

Twilight, Cadence, Luna, and even Celestia were nervous about how fang responded and honestly were scared for Fang right now. What Armor did surprised them all. He smiled, "Good to hear my, possibly, future brother-in-law." He turned around and went back to his seat. "Is there any other business?" The others just shook their heads. "Well then Cadence lets go we were having dinner with my parents tonight remember." Cadence smiled and the two walked away, but before they did Cadence walked up to Twilight and whispered in her ear.

"I hope you marry him, your perfect for each other, I know he may be a little scary but he really is nice. I also hope you two have a foal so that I and Shiny could have a niece or nephew. Oh and by the way I'm due for a foal in three weeks." With that Cadence walked off, and Twilight fainted.

Fang looked at Twilight's unconscious body then looked at Celestia and Luna. "I'll take her home it is on my way after all. I bid you two a good day." With that his red aura surrounded Twilight, himself, and his guards and in a flash they were gone.

Celestia looked at Luna. "Well that was a.... interesting turn of events." She then looked at the clock on the wall. "Well it is time for lunch. Care to join me Lulu?" Luna said nothing and just nodded.

Author's Note:

No no duel to the death between Armor and Fang! So I'm trying to be original, SUE ME!

Comments

[Blackplague689]

Little too fast on the fanglight, but other than that its good.

[BlackBloodProject]

(Before this chapter) Let me guess... more of FangLight buildup?

(After this chapter) WHAT IS MY LIFE!??!

Oh and by the way I'm due for a foal in three weeks.

3 Cheers for subtlety.

[Look to the left]

HAHAHAHHAHAHJAJAHAHAHHAHAAHHAHAHAH!!!!

[treegrowth]

Ok, I have tried to like this story, despite its many problems.
It has a good idea, monsters who were driven to near extinction for being just that now return to try to make peace.
Romance, comedy, lessons learned, truth come to light; this could have been a great story!
However, your pacing is too fast, you barely let us know what is going on!
Like how about when Applejack meets her missing grandfather and she only says hello? Or how about when Twilight first entered Fang's memories, all you told us is that they were painful, and right after that she kissed him, a guy that she only just met, and the guy that kidnaped her friends and little brother! And after that you jumped to THREE DAYS LATER while this was going on?!?!
* sighs * I am feeling better now.
Please, at lest get an editor, I want to like this story, I really do.
But until you add in the critical details, I'm afraid that this story will never be good.
* looks at the thumps up meter* to me at lest.

[soldierantonio25]

5675135
I completely agree with this gentlemen, that is exacly what i was thinking

[Umbra Animo]

feel the whole being in love was well very fast tho that could be i just like some build up for it