Don't mind me, I'll just sit here, quietly writing bad stories. And songs. And stories with songs.
Ponyville may be a small town, but it doesn't mean that it's a humdrum life. Follow Twilight Sparkle on her mystery cases all over town, in pursuit of the truth!
Based on My Little Investigations, by GabuEx. I have nothing to do with the guy, and neither does this fic; it's just a fanwork of a fanwork.
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It seems like it's off to a decent start. Like you said it was a relatively simple mystery, the moment this new character showed up it was kind of obvious he would be the culprit or connected to whatever happened. BUT, the way he hid the necklace was clever and got a chuckle out of me. I also enjoyed Pinkies insistence on staying in character as St. Pink. (It would have been genius if they really were two separate characters but I don't know how you would pull something like that off. I look foreword to seeing if this goes anywhere and congratulate you on your decent start. (Also happy Fourth of July)
Seems interesting.
Mrs. Cake's first name is Cup... Get it? Cup Cake?
Oh God, Twilight is the Equestrian Wesley Stickler! Quick, hide your underwear!
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If only pony-dom had a concept of underwear...
2942906 she's a panty snatcher?
This reminds me Detective Conan, XD Anyway, So Awesome!
and back to the start
Not too shabby. Enjoyable, but the mystery was a bit too simple for me. I'll keep reading to see how it goes.
Also, happy Independence Day.
Update?