A twist on the legend of Nightmare Moon.
Once upon a time, in the land of Equestria, two royal sisters rules over the kingdom and created harmony for everyone. To do this, the elder raised the sun at dawn, an the younger brought out the moon at dusk.
One day, the elder realised how much her subjects relished and enjoyed her sister's night, but shunned and hid away from her light. Running out of ways to make them love her warmth and light again, she decides on one final resort, but at a great cost. Everything shall burn.
Chapters (7)
I love the story so far,but the tags really do bother me. I love how the story is executed; however, I keep seeing an amazing romance plot set up. It'd be a shame to see it turn into a dark tragedy, but ill continue to read as I'm very interested in the plot.
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Thank you for all the feedback! I never really wanted to turn this into a romance, but maybe in the future..? I'm horrid at writing romance stories though
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haha if its not in your plan for this fan fic then don't take the romance idea into consideratjon, its kinda a personal preference lool. But keep up the great work!
Wow that was good.
When will there be more?
2704194 There will probably be updates every 2 or so days. (Maybe faster or slower, depends~)
PURE AWESOMMNESS!!!!!!
I'm loving this story
"tangled up fluff that was once her beautiful pink mane,"
Uh... This doesn't quite sound like Celestia, more like
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Haha, I know~
I guess it's just the idea that a while after Celestia banished Nightmare Moon, her mane changed to the multi-coloured one, but before she had a light pink mane.
This is looking interesting so far. I'm enjoying it.
I wonder what she'll do next.........
WRITE MORE YOUR PRINCESS DEMANDS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I can't stop reading it GIVE ME MORE!!!!
Pleeeeeaaaassssse writ more!
I think we can all guess what's going to happen at the celebration. It won't be a pretty sight.
I hope you will finish this? I really like this story.