Sequel to "Apple Bloom's Family". Apple Bloom and the Crusaders travel to Manehattan to meet her father, the banker pony Orange Counter. She discovers her place in the Orange family and the bright lights of Manehattan, teaches a new circle of friends the Crusader way of life, and learns more about herself than she ever dreamed possible.
Awesome! I loved Apple Bloom's Family, this is going to be great!
I now fear for the safety of Manehattan's population.. Great job, looking forward to the rest! Also, I'm hoping that Scootaloo's version is a little less accurate than Sweetie's in this one, and that Chalk ISN'T dead. I reckon that'd make for a short story, anyway.
I can't wait to see where this is going.
Let's hope there is a next chapter :)
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u write moar?
458196 626593 819972 I will, indeed! I have, unfortunately, been rather careless about starting too many projects at a time, and a couple of other stories have higher priority right now. I have a lot of plans for this story, so I won't be letting it disappear, that's for certain.
That's great to hear, better late and great, than a rushed or a *gasp* non.existant update! GL with your projects
Update now
I loved Apple Bloom's Family! *hits fave*
So far so jolly.
So the Apple's and the Diamonds get lifelong appointments to the city council. I find that unsettling.
I think you missed a line. How did that tell her Applejack is her mother? Here's how I would have expected that to go:
Applejack: You always were a persistent little filly. I guess you get that from your mother.
Apple Bloom: [gasp!] So it was Chalk!? [runs to Mac] DADDY!!!
Applejack: What!? NO!
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I feel your pain my friend. Hope you get back to it when you find a good stopping point for your other stories.
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I'm running out of fanfics to read. Beauty of the beast was canceled and Forbidden Fruit is over, so I can't wait for the next chapter.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
HopeFox why U take so long to update
More please.