I write to write, and will try to help those that are having life troubles. My IRL friends labeled me the male Princess Luna because of my night owl status. I am King Artermis of the Moon.
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This story is moving way too fast. I suggest combining your chapters into at least 2 because by chapter 4 we should already be starting on the meat of the story; this still feels like prologue material.
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Thanks for the heads up.
This pony really reminds me of Feather Touch from Machinations of a Trickster.
And she's my favorite character!
My favorite line
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Yep, kinda borrowed her.
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Nevered liked Blue Blood anyways.
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When angry think of yourself as your OC kicking Blueblood's royal ass
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Exactly. And someone who finally understands
2785880 I do that a lot as well but I just think brutal doom marine punching bluebitchs face-in
love the story
Longer chapters are needed Celestia demands of you!
more chapters please
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Working on getting through this covid 19 bullshit, and making sure my family survives it. Not all that hard in practice, but difficult none the less.
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Hope they make it through all right and I hope there is more content for this story as this is very good.