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King Artermis


I write to write, and will try to help those that are having life troubles. My IRL friends labeled me the male Princess Luna because of my night owl status. I am King Artermis of the Moon.

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This story is moving way too fast. I suggest combining your chapters into at least 2 because by chapter 4 we should already be starting on the meat of the story; this still feels like prologue material.

"Feather Touch will be your servant here at the castle, so Miss Touch?" Celestia calls to a white unicorn. The unicorn walks over to Celestia.

"Follow me sir."

"My name is Feather Touch. I am your servant here at the palace."

This pony really reminds me of Feather Touch from Machinations of a Trickster. :rainbowderp:

And she's my favorite character! :pinkiehappy:

"I'm preparing to kick your ass boy."

My favorite line :rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

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Yep, kinda borrowed her.

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Nevered liked Blue Blood anyways.:trollestia:

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When angry think of yourself as your OC kicking Blueblood's royal ass :trollestia:

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Exactly. And someone who finally understands

2785880 I do that a lot as well but I just think brutal doom marine punching bluebitchs face-in

Longer chapters are needed Celestia demands of you!

more chapters please

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Working on getting through this covid 19 bullshit, and making sure my family survives it. Not all that hard in practice, but difficult none the less.

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Hope they make it through all right and I hope there is more content for this story as this is very good.

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