The Only Love for All

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xDan

xDan #1 · Mar 20th, 2013 · 3 · · The Changeling Reunion ·

“Well how did you do it?” asked Fire.
“Yeah don’t leave us hangin’” said Dark.
“If we combine our magiks, all ten of us, then the portal will open to when and where we want to be!” I replied.
“When can we do this?” asked Harmony.
“When the comet, that comes tonight, is visible.” I answered.
“Are you sure about this Water? Because if I remember right the last time we did that we all blacked out.” Said Air.
“Yes I am absolutely sure about it this time!” I replied.
“Then it is settled, we will all meet at Water’s house tonight and create this portal.” Said Light our leader, “Those who wish to help raise your hand.”
We all raised our hands in sync with each other. Light nodded in acceptance. I could not contain my excitement.
We all met at my house in my basement. I passed around a drink that boosts magikal ability and power, for we were all going to have to be at the top of our games to do this. As we all got together on the circle of power to start the spell I passed out the runes of our elements. I gave them out in order. Light, Dark, Fire, Water, Earth, Air, Life, Death, Chaos, and Harmony. We all put the runes around our necks and started the spell.
We started to will power to flow from our tan tien to our hands, and out to the middle of the circle. The powers met with a loud thunderous sound. As we all poured our energy into the middle a ball of pure energy started to glow and increase in size. When the ball was about the size of a smart car I yelled out. “This is it!” we all pushed our energy into the ball one last time as the portal started to shape. The portal opened with a continuous hum and we could see a forest inside. We all walked forward and stepped into the portal to Equestria.

I feel like a drive-by victim, that went so fast...

IPASuperior

IPASuperior #2 · Mar 20th, 2013 · · · The Changeling Reunion ·

Haha. Yep @Lazy Dan.

I'm a character in this story lol. (As the author is my friend)

I'm Fire. Woot~!

King Artermis

King Artermis #3 · Mar 20th, 2013 · · · The Changeling Reunion ·

yeah i did do that a little fast.

satnapillowpants

satnapillowpants #4 · Apr 14th, 2013 · · · The Portal ·

FIRST!
Eat it Regidar!
sorry I couldn't resist

prince cosmos

prince cosmos #5 · May 19th, 2013 · · · The Perfect Day ·

good story just a good story

and thanks for the help with my story

Lobisomen616

Lobisomen616 #6 · May 21st, 2013 · · · The Perfect Day ·

It's a good read, though the grammar is a bit weak. That said I can't do much better myself.
7.5/10 = Very good, but needs some work.

Dragon Blaze-X

Dragon Blaze-X #7 · May 28th, 2013 · · · The Portal ·

No offence but where is the back story here so we got ten people show up out of nowhere and have superpowers how dose that make sense and aren't they elements should they be gods?

King Artermis

King Artermis #8 · May 28th, 2013 · · · The Perfect Day ·

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Okay first no they are not gods, because they are the living elements . Second, I intend to have a Q&A session on the twentieth chapter so please save your questions for that. Third is that if you do have questions please send me a personal message and i will get back to you as soon as I can.