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King Artermis


I write to write, and will try to help those that are having life troubles. My IRL friends labeled me the male Princess Luna because of my night owl status. I am King Artermis of the Moon.

Comments ( 39 )

A new story great and one more thing FIRST

Interesting story so far looking forward to see what happens next and what it meant that the element of magic cracked.

Army - Hoo-ah

Marines - Hoo-rah

Navy - Hoo-ya

3115429
Thou forgot airforce.:pinkiecrazy:

3115115
I don't give out spoiliers:trollestia:, but I will say I have total badassery planned:rainbowdetermined2:, and thats just for first arc.:trollestia:

Two things first do you have read my story's on fanfiction and two ar you going to ad my character as well

one thing bad. You made them deserters for all purposes they should be killed.

In all honesty this story is crap. One: true American soldiers don't desert the military no matter what. Two: We serve the United States to our dying breath protecting her and her allies. So running off trying to go to Equestria is biggest load of crap I have ever read. Three: We do not bow to royalty and we certainly DON'T kiss their ass.

that is a really good story cant wait for more chapters.

“BRONY NIGHT OUT!!!” We all shout as we head for the showers.

NOPENOPENOPE!! I DID NOT SIGN UP FOR THIS!

3119759
I don't see why not, but it will be in a different arc, so you will have to be patient my friend.

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Trust me, a totall shit storm is coming after a few arcs to bite them in the ass about this, and quit guessing the ships correctly.:trixieshiftleft:

3123257
Chapter 7 in the works, and any preferences on who goes with Dark?
The next should be out either next week, or the week after.

3123839 none off the top of my head right now

very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

3157057
Anyone you want to go with Dark on the NMM arc, 'cause so far I only have Flame Scepter as a responce.
Please help me.:fluttercry:

3160781 how about Night Terror.

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And your choice wins, so off to write.

did anyone else notice that luna was herself in a past chapter and celestia sent a letter to twilight who want off to get her friends but didn't have any in canterlot

3250565
Reread chapter six my good sir. I have fixed that error on my part.

Another pathetic adventure of Gary Stu and his Generic Sidekick n°47©, with all the flaws and incohérences of the BiE genre.

There is no redeeming factor in the story, the characters are bland, act unrealisticaly to everything and don't care about anything happening, like almost every BiE stories.

another good chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

and very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Please continue with the story I really like it, but don't take as long updating it:scootangel:

...can't he just use his power to heal? he did it once at the hosital and no real side effect.

Chase, or Dark Frost as his squad calls him, has an unusual power. He can control water, but it turns black whenever he does, and when struck by lightning, can turn into an energy that he has no control over.
During one of the training excersises at the naval base in oregon, a thunderstorm rolls in, so come and read about what happens to Chase, and his fellow bronies from Pony Company.

i.imgur.com/YPMBk3x.jpg
i.imgur.com/LGsCe5o.jpg

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He went too long forgetting about the wound on his head, and since a head wound bleeds like a siv he noticed too late to heal his wound, and if he did it would defeat the purpose of the next chapter.

4460931 You mentioned next chapter, will you even continue this story?

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I will try, as my laptop just died, and the one I'm using now is better, but it doesn't have all my stuff on it, so please just be a little more patient.:fluttershyouch:

pwese update :fluttershysad::fluttershysad::moustache:

3115429 you forgot Air Force - Hoo-eh what was it again?...


The Air Force has one I just forgot what it was, it would make sense if it was also Hoo-ah as the airforce originates from the Army Air Corps. And the AFMAN 36-2203 Introduction to Drill and Ceremonies, does tell you to revert to the FM_3-21.5 Army drill manual for more information, if you can't find what you need to in the AFMAN.

FM_3-21.5 the manual where you can learn how to march with a granade launcher...

3115605 Hmm, funny I just said the same thing to this comment.

Needs Update, I was really getting into this.

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