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Chrysalis and her swarm all are hungry and since they are far away from their hive, they decide to pick up dinner, but where to go? Oh how about Taco Bell.
This is what I call a mindless fan fiction.
I made this when I was bored.
This is not a horror fan fiction.
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I give this story a rating of 'meh'
Dont really like or dislike it
When I first saw this, I thought it was going to be a crossover with Gravity Falls (you know, the cupcake-like fic 'Dipper goes to Taco Bell')...
It was so hilarious.
2803990 Well not really it's the same pony talking through most of the fan fic.
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
2804663 What was hilarious?
Made my day.
2807646 Good glad you liked it.
Just read Dipper goes to Taco Bell what the
did I just read that was sick.
"Yo quiero Taco Bell!" very different.
2847725 So different.
Okay, so there's a lot of places where you need commas and periods, but they are missing. There's also a lot of tense confusion. This story is supposed to be in the past, right? But sometimes you have verbs in the present.
See, this is incredibly hard to read because it's missing needed commas and periods, and there's tense confusion.
See, much better.
Also, it's too short. I'd make it longer.
NOOOOOOO! Why did Gabriel get fired he was the best character.
2804663 May I also add I immediately regretted reading it Dipper goes to Taco bell..