• Published 26th May 2013
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HiE Choose Your Own Adventure: The Mane Six and You VS Dreamweaver, Disciple of Discord. - ThereIsNo4thWall



An HiE Fanfic where you are teleported to Equestria to aid the Mane Six in a battle against a unicorn who has gained Discord's powers and plans to overthrow Equestria. Will you win? Will you fail? Will you try to join the forces of Chaos?

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Choices Chapter 4

-Rush Outside-

You dart after Lyra, almost hitting your head on the top of the door frame, and nearly running into the wall of the hallway after trying to turn so suddenly. You manage to dodge everything perfectly though, mostly through sheer luck, and quickly catch up to Lyra.

"Let's go save the world!" You say, giving a large grin to Lyra, who returns it.

"Heck yeah!" Lyra shouts. "Anything you'd like to know before we get out there, though? It'll likely be pretty crazy once we join the fight." Lyra says, slowing down a bit and breathing a little heavy. You're surprised that you're actually getting ahead of her, and you don't even feel tired! Maybe the spell that summoned you here took a lot more out of her than she's been letting on, or maybe you just have superpowers here.

"Nah," You finally say as you get down the hall and rush down the stairs. "I have plenty of questions," You explain, "but they can wait til after we win this fight. Who knows, maybe we'll beat him for good right here and now?" You can't help but feel confident, not with Lyra grinning back at you and with you feeling like you could run a marathon without feeling tired. You aren't sure what exactly is making you feel this great, your strength and energy aren't normally this high for this long, and you don't know how long it will last, but you have a feeling that it'll last just long enough for you to get at least one good punch in, and right now you feel that's all you'll need to take him down.

You jump over a couch, nearly hitting your head against the ceiling, and give the door a dramatic kick, slamming it open as you rush outside.

-Time For An Awesome Fight!-
You ready to kick some tail and be awesome?!

Comments ( 7 )

Okay! Finished up the first set of questions for today, and got a good 1.5k words or something typed up this morning. All and all pretty darn awesome, now I'm off to go to church! :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::rainbowdetermined2:

2631897 Thanks! I'm REALLY going to need it!:twilightsheepish:

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You need a password because it isn't published yet but I have parts of the page up. You won't need a password once I get it finished and published.

If you EVER make a CYOA fic or see any on here LET ME KNOW! I WISH TO READ THEM ALL! Even though if I start reading them I'll likely barely write for the entire time... :rainbowderp:

Try not to mention the hyperlink idea too much, I was hoping no one would ever notice, but I guess it's pretty obvious, but still, the less people catch on about it, the better... :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

2637836 I'm going to make these choices have a bit more of a difference than just that, but yeah, they will loop a bit. Pretty much (and I guess this is kind of a spoiler but not too much) depending on the combination of choices you make you'll end up at one of five action scenes with varying degrees of difficulty, and then depending on how you do there, you'll have three different major beginnings. This isn't including the evil path, which I'll be including later on.

2637857 You'll find out later on, and you might not like the answer, but I don't think it'll be too disappointing.

2637867 I actually meant to include that question as the first one you can ask in that box, but I was in a hurry and kind of tired so I fumbled the phrasing I suppose. I'll probably edit it later once I get it figured out in my head how I'm going to make it work.

2640261 um when will you publish the options and questions? and do you know any other fics like yours i really like the concept:pinkiehappy:

2742243 Alas I do not know of any other adventure CYOA fanfics on here, or anywhere else really. I'm keeping an eye out for them though, and I'll let you know when I find one if you do the same!

As for the update, I'm hoping to get to a certain part in the story, at which point I'll update everything to that point. Should hopefully be done by the 29th, but I'm not entirely positive. I've been stressing out about stuff lately and it's making writing difficult.

5161570 There are a few links that just go to pages I haven't published yet. I'll check real quick though in case even the ones that should work are broken, and try to fix them asap if they are.

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