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Oh, Me gusta! Spitfire! Insta-Fave!
Yes! Another step on the road of having Big Mac shipped with every single living thing ever!
Pretty good. Specially for a first story. I hope yo continue writing you have talent
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Nice! Hot! Thumbs up!
outstanding
Short, sweet and to the point, I like it!
All I really have to say in way of criticism is to make sure to always start a new paragraph when a dialogue speaker changes.
2596505 Thanks for the critique!
Reading through it again, yeah I can see how that would clean it up.
You have your friend Pinkie Pie to thank for that.
Like the big guy they keep hidden away from all the mares in town -_^
Very cute! I can see MacIntosh and Spitfire both react that way. Maybe overall a little fast, but cute nonetheless!
First time I've seen this ship, its awesome, well done
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*Grins* short and sweet. Very cute. I didn;t see anything major to nitpick over here honestly, the characters felt consistent the pacing was nice. Cute stuff. Gave you considered submitting it to Equestria After Dark?
Well that was a sweet little piece of literature. That was a pretty nice read right there. If paced well and everything seemed to be right spot on. I'll be looking forward to reading more by you in the future.
No matter how many times I read this story this line always make me think of the scene from the Fairly Oddparents. "Those eyes. That hair. That figure. Oh my gosh, it's worse than I thought. He's gorgeous!"
Would love to see another chapter to this. With Spitfire's week with Mac, or something between Applejack and Soarin
Heard about the pairing, the way you set it up was pretty nice.
Well, that escalated quickly.