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Lance Skyes


Once a writer, but now gone. You might see him again one day, though...

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Oblivion, a powerful entity who commands a massive army, makes his way to Equestria. Of course, he destroys all life there. However, Princess Luna miraculously survives the slaughter and chases Oblivion to Earth, where she, with the help of four humans, creates new Elements of Harmony. Far stronger than before, representing not only the pony spirit, but the human spirit, as well. With these powers combined, four ordinary high school students become the Equestria Knights, final guardians of harmony and sworn defenders of all that Oblivion threatens.

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Umm, I think the mane 6 as well as the princesses are a little out of character...
Yeah, a lot out of character...
Also, why does Oblivion want to destroy Equestria and earth so badly in the first place?

“Pathetic.” Oblivion then began walking off. “Next stop... Earth.”

So cliched...so cliched... *Slams head against wall*

I don't want to hate to much on this story, but you REALLY need to revise this.

"THE BANANAS KILL ALL! ONWARD MY BANANAFANA'S! FOR WE HAVE TO DESTROY FOR NO PARTICULAR REASON!" And than they killed all of the Russians.
THE END.

2567918 Agreed, you really need to revise this.


Edit: I am going to punch the thumbs up button. Because no one else is, and since no one else is I must do it.

Yeah, I suppose I could have done this better... :raritycry: Anyway, Oblivion's fascination with both Equestria and Earth will be revealed later in the fic.

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