"Where's that Fan Fiction?!" and "Pip's First Story."

by overlord-flinx

Pip's First story.

One bright, sunny, happy, glimmery, sun filled day, the sun flew high in the sky. Princess Luna was looking at it, because she was on her way into Ponyville to play with Pip. "Hello, Mr. Sun," Luna greeted with a funny tone of voice and wording that I can't spell. She laughed since the sun could not say hello back (that's a funny part). So, Luna skipped down the long, twisty, windy, rocky, hill, mountain, grass road all the way to Ponyville. When she got there, everyone threw a party for her and gave her cake (but she had to eat it after she had lunch, because dessert before food is bad for your tummy). Then Pip found her at the party and waved at her.

"Hello, Luna!" Pip sounded so cool and stuff that made everyone look at him because he's cool and stuff.

"Good to see you Pip. Do you want cake?" Then they shared the cake and everyone cheered. (Yaaaaay.)

The End.

No, that's not the end yet. I got you there, didn't I? Nope. The story keeps going. Only, now Pip is all the way in the Changeling empire... After he fought off a three four gazilion headed hydra with a spoon on his way there. Oh, and he and Luna cuddled AS FRIENDS. They're just friends. So stop writing those lies on the sidewalk. They even put up posters saying they were just friends. Not like the posters Pip's mommy makes him put up in his room about Changelings being super cool and stronger than ponies. So, Pip got home and said hello to all the Changelings. There's a lot of them, so he misses some, but he still likes all of them so none of them should be sad if he missed them. He still likes them all. Then, he went to his mommy, the beautiful and tall Queen Chrysalis. To say she's pretty is just one nice thing about her. She's so cool, smart, and really really funny. Pip looks up to her and wants to find a filly like her some day... Just maybe not so loud...

Chrysalis gives Pip a mean, scary look, but she loves him, so that's alright. "Prince, go to bed."

It was bed time, but Pip was still sad. He dragged his hooves along, so very sad and... sad. BUT! Then his daddy Discord came in out of nowhere (that's not bad writing, he does that.). Discord is really nice too. He looks scary some times, but he looks like everything really. And that makes him special. Because Discord is specailly special all the way in the heart of Pip. So, Discord takes Pip and sends him to his room. But, he snuck him some rice and sticks. So Pip was really happy with that. Chrysalis and Discord came to his room together then and gave him a kiss on the head goodnight.

"We love you, Pip."

"I love you too."

THE END FOR REALSIES! YAAAAAAY!

Art: Pip
Story: Pip
Idea: Pip
Editor: Pip
Caterer: Pip
Colour Coordinator: Pip
Lighting: Pip
Proxy Written by Luna.

Comments

[xXCondemnedSoulXx]

Pip's story was just so...
entrancing!
I need more pip! I crave it more so than ever!

[Jaye_Ventus]

An incredibly cute story! We need more pip! XD

[Opponent]

Its always the quiet ones. Torn apart between "I dunno what i just read" and "I wish I had Rainbow Dash as a parent", I do have to admit one thing for sure. Not bad, not bad at all :3

[Zytharros]

Yup. This is a thing. A good thing.

[superpony55]

Was the love letter from Luna?

[overlord-flinx]

2547029 Who knows?

[superpony55]

2547138

[doorcf]

is the love letter a tie to They grow Up?, because if it is Discord and the Queen need to train their memory

[overlord-flinx]

2547707 Tee-hee. Someone's getting the idea~~.

[The Libertarian Brony]

Beautiful! Spectacular! We've found the next J.R.R. Tolkien!

[Chaotic Note]

Well Pip, this holds... a lot of potential. It just needs a little polish, and maybe less of your actual feelings of the story and-
BLA;DSLKFL;ASDJ;FDK

[Dart Gryphon]

2547138

What is this supposed to mean?

When somebody have to know than YOU!

[Magatsu Orpheus]

2547029>>2547707
Am I mssing something? What love letter?

[superpony55]

2549991

Searching through, however, they found nothing except for a love letter from-- AH! Who cares? It wasn't the book...

From the story, when they were searching through his scarves.

[Juria]

Very adorable story, and quite fitting with Pip's personality.

[doorcf]

2547787

first time I'm right about something you do....

Now I shall party harder than Pinkie Pie...see you in the afterlife

[Dragaen]

I think the heartless soul that is Chrysalis has been shattered with kindness, good work Pip

[Dark Half-Brony]

WOW!!!! Pip is innocent and adorable inside and out , this story made me laugh so much At lest Discord and Chrysalis wont have to worry about Pip growing up to be a pervert( or Chrysalis might be a little disappointed, ya now eats love and stuff.) good 2 know those two haven't made him Equestrias greatest villan.......yet

[Starlight Nova]

Equestria Daily. Submit. Now.

[overlord-flinx]

2583147 Can't. As they put it "They would have to accept a world where Discord and Chrysalis raise Pip". Which is TOO crazy... Apparently.

[Smirkythread]

Very cute, cringed when I saw the writing by Pip. Well done.

[MadNimrod]

This was adorable. Definitely faving this.

[TheOneBehindYou]

I'm having diabetes again

[Skyguy7_13]

Pip, you are the best writer out there.
You even beat Overlord at writing.

[MarkTheWolfpony]

Very cute

[DualKitsune]

Bhfdggv!
The cute! It's attacking! Don't succumb to the adorableness! It's..... Soooo sweet!