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It is the eve of the Summer Sun Celebration and Sunlight Shimmer, Prince Shinings faithful student, comes across an ancient prophecy telling of the return of the terrible Nightmare Twilight. Can she save Equastria in time? Will she be able to discover the Elements of Harmony? Will ponies stop trying to be friends with her so she can figure out what they are?

A story in which Celestia is everyone's favorite egghead.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 15 )

I'll read this when the description doesn't say "Witch" it really makes me think this story is written by a five year old.
No offense.

"Prince Shinings faithful student" APOSTROPHE.
"Can she save Equastria" SPELLING.
"in witch Celestia is" SPELLING.
Offense.

2489564 Hey I am six years old, and frankly I take offense at your ageist commentary. Its intolerant. How would you feel If I told you whats expected from you based on your gender or hair color?

2489679 I'd say it still sounds like a five-year old wrote it.

For you see, the mythical Mare in the Moon is in fact Nightmare Moon

:trixieshiftleft:

Sun-light-Spark-le

:ajbemused:
I'll follow it but......FIX IT:flutterrage:

you made quite a lot of mistakes in there and kept going back to the original mlp

A lot of negative attention towards my spelling and grammar and I get that, I'm really bad with that kind of stuff and I'm sorry, I'll try to fix the errors as best I can but thanks for at least reading it and giving it chance.

2489679 Sorry man I didn't know you were six man, like, if there were three of you, it would be 666 so obviously that makes you a demon and why should I be nice a demon?

*reads description*

Wait, WHAT?

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Is the concept of alternate universes that foreign to you?

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No, but this makes NO sense!

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It makes perfect sense. It's an alternate universe with Celestia in the Twilight role. There's a fic with Octavia in that role. Celestia in the same role makes sense to me.

Golden Slumbers? Was that a Beatles reference? If so, that was awesome.

realy :ajbemused: Gandalf :ajbemused: realy twilight hired gandalf to stop them :facehoof:

Comment posted by JimmyHook19 deleted Feb 8th, 2017
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