"War is no reason to end a friendship..."
Equestria, now torn into factions, each relying on tactics and sneaking agents in a constant war, is not what it used to be. There used to be flowers, peace, and the friendship all ponies shared amongst one another, but that was gone too, after individual areas began to want independence and tried to break off. In an attempt to create the perfect squad, the Harmony Operation was enacted so that they one day could restore peace to this forsaken land that was once so perfect and serene. These are the adventures of the mane six characters and their mission to restore Equestria, all the while meeting new and old friends alike.
Chapters (5)
Woah. Sounds promising!
This sounds to be an interesting story. I'll be tracking this.
Found a few minor errors, but nothing that could ruin the overall enjoyment.
Poisonous Zanzibar Bunnies!
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What were the errors? Also, any tips would be well appreciated, this is the first fanfiction I've written so I'm trying to make it as well-written as I can.
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Put a comma (,) after "New Equestria", capitalize "canterlot" and "element of harmony". If you don't have any proofreaders, I'm happy to help.
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That'd be wonderful, I'd really appreciate that!
OH MY GOD MAGIC GEAR
I can just imagine this getting a newgrounds parody by fans of Metal Gear Awesome and this fic.
just sayin' though.
Great
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No, but There was a time paradox involved that may have shifted the time space continuum, no big problem there....I hope
Thank goodness for that. "TWILIGHT, YOU CAN'T DO THAT! THE FUTURE WILL BE CHANGED! YOU'LL CREATE A TIME PARADOX!!!!!
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Good ol times, back when i played hours of mgs 3, and I always got a kick out of killing ocelot and getting the OCELOT IS DEAD screen. With any luck, I'll have the next chapter up later today....after I finished writing the rough draft because I'm way too ahead of schedule.
Oh, really?! Nice reference at the end there. xD
This is pretty good! Minor misspells but the coolness of this fic glosses over it! Can't wait to see more!
This story's amazing
War, has changed.
It's no longer about nations, tummaches, or who got the last cupcake. It's an endless series of proxy battles, fought by mercinaries and manticores. War - and its consumption of life - has become a well-oiled machine.
War has changed.
ID-tagged ponies carry ID-tagged weapons, use ID-tagged gear. Nanomagic inside their bodies enhance and regulate their abilities. Genetic control. Information control. Emotion control. Battlefield control. Everything is monitored and kept under control.
War, has changed.
The age of deterrence has become the age of control. All in the name of averting catastrophe from weapons of mass destruction. And he who controls the battlefield... Controls history.
War, has changed.
When the battlefield is under total control... War becomes routine.
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As if war couldn't change enough for an old( or in this case young) elite pony sneaking agent with a craving for headbands....soon