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Feb
16th
2019

On Giving Criticism: "Possibility" and "Suspension of Disbelief" · 6:33pm Feb 16th, 2019

So recently, I took part in a... unnamed scifi Youtube channel's Discord Server contest and learned some key things about how to give a criticism on a author/artist/media creator's ideas. I'm happy to name them if you ask me in private, but the reason for not naming them in public on this post will become abundantly clear when I get into this.

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Jul
27th
2018

Forever Inferno: Chapter Two Preview · 9:11pm Jul 27th, 2018

The sledgehammer slammed into the concrete wall, a new hole in its surface. The other workers had long since gone home, leaving Jazzmania all by her lonesome. Not that she cared. She'd been at it for hours, effortlessly driving the large hammer into the wall. She wasn’t getting paid extra for this but then again, she didn’t care.

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Sep
1st
2017

On the Fourth Wall · 1:09pm Sep 1st, 2017

When a character attempts to break the fourth wall, it may disturb a suspension of disbelief. A reader may not want to participate in the story as a character. Or the world in the reader’s mind is too different from the world in the writer's mind.

It may be especially disturbing if the author switches to the second person narration.


Source.

Of course, sometimes and for some genres it may work.

Dec
13th
2016

Being a Better Writer: Balancing Readers' Suspension of Disbelief · 1:02am Dec 13th, 2016

"Go! Go! Go!" Natalie didn't need to be told twice. With the clock ticking, the building was only minutes from coming apart in a blast that would level half the block. If she could get away before then, she had a chance, but if not ...

"Go!" the voice in her ear shouted once more.

"I'm going!" she snapped, crouching by the body of the colonel and retrieving his sidearm. Some of his thugs could still be standing between her and the exit.

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Oct
7th
2016

Season 6 Finale Plot Holes, But All in Spoiler Text Because I'm Not a Dick · 4:59pm Oct 7th, 2016

Have a giant Lyra. My gripes are behind the break.

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May
8th
2016

Paradox · 8:10am May 8th, 2016

Don't Follow, A world of Darkness and Sadness

A lengthy Tale, About the one who Lost

A Champion, Of Horror

A Hero, One of Death

And an Adventure you will want to forget.

Paradox.

Come and lose Your Sanity!

Entries 1 and 1.25 out now.

Mar
27th
2020

Chapter 16 Ready to Go! · 1:33am March 27th

I have one chapter of a double feature complete and ready to publish! Yay! Finally! But...much like chapter 6 and 7, it's critical that it be paired with the chapter that comes after. There's a good reason for this. So, I hope everyone following the

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May
23rd
2018

Making the Best of Bad, Emersion Breaking Story Telling Part 2. Dealer’s choice Patreon reward for TheGreatEater, whether he wants it or not! · 5:07am May 23rd, 2018

We’re finally continuing part 2 of my Breaking Bad post for all 30 of you who care! Again, part of my Patreon reward system I’m trying to catch up on!

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Oct
11th
2016

New story coming · 2:15am Oct 11th, 2016

Feb
26th
2019

OPWA: Episode Fifteen · 9:35pm Feb 26th, 2019

Overpriced Writing Advice
Where you can learn the stuff I paid thousands of dollars to have taught to me, for free.

Creating Suspense

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Jan
4th
2016

Update #1 · 5:56pm Jan 4th, 2016

Updates on my story Fallout Equestria: Straitjacket.

As i'm sure, everypony can relate, the holidays have been super busy busy, and has stopped me from taking time for my story, but no worries, i will be working on it very soon, and Chapter 4 is almost done. So those who are following Straitjacket will be hearing of chapter 4 soon~

Yay for blog# 2 :yay:

Jun
10th
2018

"The Mean 6" Review: A Dark Future for Equestria? · 2:45am Jun 10th, 2018

And here we are, arrived at Season 8's mid-season finale! And it brought us a huge surprise..... Much earlier than expected, Chrysalis returned to enact her revenge for losing her hive! And she did not waste any time and got straight down to business.....

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