More samples of "Equestria: Civil War" rewrites · 5:56am Sep 29th, 2016
Fast as lightning, sharp as a sword
Here's another section from chapter 2:
“Twilight, I haven’t truly had any regrets in helping you realize your potential as a princess until recently,” Celestia continued. “But recounting all of these events, both before and after your ascension, I believe you are a bit too comfortable with your own friendship lessons to know the difference between friendship opportunities and actual threats to Equestria.”