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Here you'll get some good ol' constructive criticism. ~Note, this isn't to break people down. It is to build their stories up.

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ERelapse
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
In Twilight’s eyes, the mind control was nothing more than a mistake. But for Starlight? It meant a lot more.
Twilight
Starlight Glimmer
Uz Naimat · 3.3k words · 110 1 · 945 views
TOnline Bullying Is Not Cool
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
My name is Little Snow andI’m being bullied online because of my disability with ponies saying that I’m not actually disabled and that I’m just faking it, I keep telling them I am not, but they don’t listen to me, one day it gets so bad that.
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Rainbow Dash
Apple Bloom
OC
Artist · 1.2k words · 441 views
TThe Malevolent Multiversal Misadventures of Mare (April Fools 2024 Special)
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Adventure
Comedy
Random
Once upon a time, there was a random pony in Ponyville. When a villain shows up, this overpowered Mary Sue of a character must venture bëÿönd Extria im order to find thr Generic MacGuffin. Only then will she have a chef of defeating this boring villa
Violence
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Other
Bat Pony
Misty
Admiral Producer · 32k words · 17 2 · 133 views
ELife of a Sullen Warrior
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
MLP: Comic
Dark
Adventure
Tragedy
a young woman with an abnormal tail is thrown into a world far removed from her own farmer life, now stuck in this new land of magic and odd folks from all walks of life what can someone do in her position? Live? fight? die by the hands of another?
Celestia
Luna
Cadance
Main 6
Main 7 (EqG)
King Of The Below · 35k words · 13 2 · 226 views
EHow Does It Not Bother You?
MLP: Comic
MLP Gen 5
Drama
Sad
Slice of Life
Following the events of “Swirlpool Starlight,” Misty is feeling more conflicted about her past being brought to the surface than ever. Fortunately, one pony may be able to help her see the bright side to it all….
Misty
Violette Rainbow
Admiral Producer · 1.9k words · 21 2 · 349 views
TWho Have You Ever Loved?
MLP Gen 5
Dark
Slice of Life
Tragedy
Magic is dead. In an alternate timeline where Opaline has crushed the ponies of Equestria under her rule, Hitch and a ragtag group of survivors must team up with the most unlikely of allies in order to end it all….
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Hitch Trailblazer
Izzy Moonbow
Sunny Starscout
Sprout
Misty
Admiral Producer · 3.1k words · 472 views
EChild Of Wonder
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Sad
Slice of Life
It’s almost been 20 years since Applejack and Stevie got married, and now they are blessed with a beautiful daughter named Melody.
Alt. Universe
Zecora
OC
Main 6
CMCs
Cozy Glow
Artist · 16k words · 18 27 · 377 views
TColor War 1 (Rewritten)
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Drama
Tragedy
A war started over tension among the color countries.
Gore
Death
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Main 6
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 6k words · 237 views
EHaven
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
Slice of Life
After being released from Broadhoof Memorial Psychiatric Hospital, Twilight Sparkle attempts to rebuild her life and friendships in Canterlot, but finds that regaining the trust of those she hurt might be harder than she initially imagined….
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Minuette
Moondancer
Twinkleshine
Lemon Hearts
Admiral Producer · 6.6k words · 19 2 · 372 views
TStar Wars: The Trials of the Force (Part One)
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Star Wars
Adventure
Slice of Life
Tragedy
Silverstream’s Padawan is kidnapped and stolen from her in a heart-wrenching betrayal from within the Jedi Order. Silver vows revenge and embarks on a journey across the universe to save her….
Violence
Death
Profanity
Crossover
Alt. Universe
Other
Ocellus
Silverstream
Admiral Producer · 49k words · 19 5 · 540 views
EYou can't handle the tooth!
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Drama
Apple Bloom learned she got a cavities but she refuses to go to the dentist.
Applejack
Apple Bloom
Granny Smith
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 1.7k words · 174 views
ELast Minute Deliveries
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
Why is Derpy still delivering presents right before Hearths Warming? Doc doesn't know, but he's certainly on the case.
Derpy
Doctor Whooves
Unity Bringer · 3.1k words · 35 0 · 262 views
EA Second Chance
MLP: FiM
MLP: Comic
MLP Gen 5
Romance
Drama
Slice of Life
Izzy invites Discord over for Hearth’s Warming dinner with her friends in Maretime Bay following his attempt to destroy magic. Discord remembers the last time he had a group of friends and is unsure if he is worthy of a second chance…
Alt. Universe
Fluttershy
Discord
Other
Izzy Moonbow
Mane 5
Admiral Producer · 9.5k words · 46 5 · 938 views
TI Feel Sorry For You
MLP Gen 5
Drama
Sad
Slice of Life
An alternate ending to “The Roots of All Evil Pt 2.” What if that confrontation between Misty and Opaline in Zephyr Heights went differently? What if Misty was able to break through Opaline’s stubbornness for a moment and actually reform her…?
Death
Alt. Universe
Pipp
Zipp
Opaline
Misty
Admiral Producer · 4.8k words · 66 4 · 2.1k views
EI’m Not A Princess!
MLP: FiM
MLP Gen 5
Comedy
Random
Slice of Life
Sunny wants to get to know Spike better after their battle with Opaline, so she takes a trip to the Isle of Scaley for a simple conversation between friends. Unfortunately, Spike seems incapable of grasping this one simple fact about her….
Spike
Dragons
Sunny Starscout
Admiral Producer · 3.3k words · 130 6 · 2.6k views
EWhat Makes A Leader?
MLP Gen 5
Drama
Sad
Slice of Life
Violet Frost reflects on her new position as leader of Starlight Ridge during a snowy trek through the woods….
Other
Admiral Producer · 2.2k words · 27 3 · 411 views
EA Passing Comet
MLP Gen 5
Romance
Sad
Slice of Life
Comet contemplates the new life he has been given with his friends in Equestria and what he’ll do with it….
Other
Izzy Moonbow
Admiral Producer · 2.6k words · 35 2 · 698 views
TNot a prank
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Sad
What if the joke cookies weren't a prank and actually killed and turn the Ponyville citizens into cookie zombies.
Gore
Violence
Death
Rainbow Dash
Celestia
Main 6
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 3.6k words · 26 6 · 1.1k views
TBirthday Pony
MLP: FiM
Dark
Horror
Thriller
The Mane 6 summon the Birthday pony, an old Ponyville urban legend.
Violence
Gore
Death
Main 6
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 2k words · 316 views
TRedeemed
MLP: FiM
MLP: Movie
MLP Gen 5
Dark
Adventure
Slice of Life
The long-anticipated clash has finally arrived. The world’s magic has been destroyed and all hope is gone. With the fate of Equestria hanging in delicate balance, Misty must lead her friends in their final confrontation against Opaline….
Gore
Violence
Suicide / Self Harm
Death
Profanity
Alt. Universe
Izzy Moonbow
Sunny Starscout
Mane 5
Opaline
Misty
Admiral Producer · 84k words · 26 5 · 1.6k views
TPurpose
MLP Gen 5
Dark
Sad
Slice of Life
After a devastating betrayal from within cost all of Equestria its magic once more, Misty attempts to come to terms with the role that she played in its downfall, all while struggling to find her purpose in a town that has lost all of it…
Violence
Death
Alt. Universe
Hitch Trailblazer
Izzy Moonbow
Pipp
Opaline
Misty
Admiral Producer · 22k words · 25 3 · 957 views
TCozy Glow is Real
MLP: FiM
Drama
Horror
Slice of Life
John is a brony, his favourite pony is Cozy Glow and he knows that Cozy is real. And nothing in this world or another could make him think otherwise. Nothing.
Human
OC
Cozy Glow
Fluttercheer · 13k words · 9 6 · 485 views
TPantyhose Warrior
Equestria Girls
Dark
Comedy
Drama
Wallflower Blush finds herself in a tight spot.
Fetish
Human
Sunset Shimmer
Wallflower Blush
Bad Dragon · 6k words · 13 27 · 452 views
EMilk and Cookies
MLP: FiM
Drama
Starlight comforts a crying Spike
Alt. Universe
Spike
Starlight Glimmer
Serenity Darkmoon Raven · 1.3k words · 12 9 · 868 views

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