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Perceptive Key


Writing and ponies are the only things that have ever really inspired me other than any Disney film. All I have to say is: "If one door closes, look for a window to jump through..."

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This story is a sequel to The Whooves Collection Episode Two: Vengeful Hate


Twilight has fallen through the time vortex and has been transported back to the Crystal Empire under the reign of the malicious King Sombra. The Doctor comes to her aid, but finds that the Empire holds a dark secret. With the help of a mysterious stallion and his numbers, the Doctor and Twilight face off against Sombra and one of the universe's deadliest foes: the Vashta Nerada.


Episode Written by: Perceptive Key
Cover art is my own, but will be elaborated upon and improved.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 14 )

when i read your description: vashta nerada... that rings a bell... *googles it* oh dear god not those!

So Jonathan lack a mark, I don't see the problem. Usualy, when you lost your memory and then recover it, you don't know who you are (between the one you were without memory and the one you were before). In that case, he doesn't know his talent.

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Though, even if you loose your memory, your CM should remain. I'm basing this that all ponies receive their marks before adulthood, meaning that it's very strange for him to be lacking one.

eeyup the Vashta Nerada dem a bad bunch o' bunnies :eeyup:

HOLY CRAP MASON! WE FOUND THE SOURCE OF THE NUMBERS! GET REZNOV! XD

I only see one issue. How does The Doctor have the screwdriver to work on the rift machine if Twilight has it in the TARDIS? :derpyderp1:

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OH MY GOD!!!! I COMPLETELY FORGOT!!!!
I'll fix that IMMEDIATELY!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!

You might want to sort out a problem with your bold on this chapter

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I honestly had no idea that happened. :derpyderp2:

well done I am liking the series so far. keep up the good work

2463561 this is dachande, mason is currently out on a mission. but i will get reznov for you. be back in a jiffy.

2456199 yes. "shadows that melt the flesh" or the pirhanas of the air.

oh, and i cant reply to two people at the same time on my vita.

you put "all i need to do is strengthen--- vashta naradaand shove off without a scratch!" :derpytongue2: forgot the space.

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