After crash-landing on a deserted island, Twilight, her friends, and the remaining survivors of Airship 815 must band together to escape. But, they must also deal with the strange, mysterious forces that inhabit this new island...
Twilight Sparkle, Spike, and their friends have booked passage on a new airship for their overseas return to Canterlot after their vacation in Sydneigh. When the flight takes a turn for the worse and they crash on a deserted island, the six mares and young dragon must work together with the other passengers to survive and find a way off the island.
Categorized as AU for airplanes, OCs, and altered character stories.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic created by: Lauren Faust
LOST created by: Damon Lindelof, Jeffrey Lieber, & J.J. Abrams
Fan fiction created and written by: Perceptive Key
One HUGE thanks to PlazmaticBrony for being my proofreader.
Small Edit: I realized that my renumbering of 815 into 518 was a tad ridiculous, so I've changed it back to Airship 815. It's LOST after all! *shrugs*
But, if you know the plot to LOST, wouldn't this be pointless to read? Do you deviate away from the original's plot at any time? Not bashing or anything, just thought I'd ask.
Original Character
Name: Ia Masen
Age: 20
Cutie Mark: A rainbow spiral
Eye Color: Gray
Coat Color: White
Mane/Tail Color: Black
Occupation: Painter
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These stories will not be mirroring the original series and there will be many deviations. This fiction will have many, many changes to the original LOST plot. But you can still expect some characters that mimic others in the show like Twilight=Jack, as well as other OCs that may resemble other characters. Each character will have separate backstories and reasons for ending up on the island that will be different from the show. Some may look similar, but I'm not going to basically plagiarize the entire series.
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A very promising character! I'll be sure to use them! Thanks! Expect him to introduced one or two chapters from now. One question, though, are they male or female?
a LOST crossover?
mate, you have quite a task ahead of you. I'm counting on you to not only pull this off, but to somehow alter the original shows plot and make this your own. not just copypasta the original plot
I'm counting on you here...don't let me down
and now, I hear your looking for OC's for your story?
how does this sound?
NAME: penscratch
CUTIE MARK: a scroll
COAT: light-ish brown
MANE/TAIL: blue
EYE COLOR: green
OCCUPATION: scribe
an artists conception:
i1298.photobucket.com/albums/ag48/stiggerzz/meh/penscratch_zpsda975ae7.png
no, this isn't a pathetic attempt at getting one of my OC's into your story
yes, this is something I literally made right after reading your authors note just to fulfill your request
you're welcome
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Very well then. Good luck with the story, then.
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Definitely going to include him, thank you! He may appear one or two chapters from now.
The task of completing this series will take up much of my free time and watching more LOST (I'm just about to complete the fifth season) so that I can see how I can change and alter everyone's backstories, as well as devising clever plot twists that you will NEVER see coming.
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Can I expect you to follow the stories, though?
2750267 Female. And you call her . . . promising? I created her in, like, three minutes after reading your A/N. Am I just really that good or are you exaggerating?
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That's truth! I can now create a new (possibly fatal ) story for her, one that I've been teasing in my mind but have never known how to execute until now!
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feel free to do what you want with him
he is literally just a pawn for your story
going to trust you on this
Well, if thou art seeking OCs for thine tale, I shalt submit mine own.
Enough of that silliness. Here's my dude.
Name: Plaz
Race: Unicorn
Age: 26
Cutie Mark: A black diamond with a lightning bolt imposed on it.
Eyes: Yellow
Coat: Green
Mane: Green-gray with black streak
Occupation: Energy Researcher/Professor at University of Sydneigh
There ya go, do what ye wish with him!
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I may alter his name, but I love the rest of him! Character backstories ahoy!
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Why, thank ye!
This is actually the third incarnation of Plaz from my head.
Can't wait to see where you take him.
I love you, i love you I LOVE YOU. sorry, just... let me calm down.. i would like to submit an OC. so yeah...
Name: Warm breeze
Eyes: Blue
Mane: Dark Blue
Coat: Green
Race: Unicorn
Occupation: Ex-Psychologist, now an inmate
Mark: A Candle
Backstory: Used to be a psychologist, until he was arrested for arson.
also, have a like and favourite.
Not only I fav this story, I'll also submit an OC
Original Character
Name: Emerald Ivy
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Cutie Mark: a leaf-like jewel attached to a vine
Eye Color: emerald green
Coat Color: minty green
Mane/Tail Color: black with dark green highlights
Occupation: Botanist/Chemist from Sydneigh
*I intended for her to be a changling/pony hybrid, but if that doesn't work, she can be just an Earth pony*
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That character is very creative and I'm sure that I could work in a clever plot for her. Great job and thanks!
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I take it you're glad I made the very first MLP/LOST crossover.
As for the OC, I'm intrigued. I'm sensing a troubling backstory coming on...
2756490 Happy I could help.
I have to say, this is pretty good so far.
A couple of problems I do have with it, though, are as follows:
1. A lot happens in a very short amount of time. This isn't too much of a problem, though, since that's probably the feeling you were trying to get out of it. So much happening, so little time to take it all in.
2. An adult human can lose a lot of blood before really bad stuff starts happening to them. Since it's ponies, I can make small exceptions to this, but it still stands that you can lose up to 40% of the blood in your body and still live. Here's something to try: Fill up a water bottle and add some red food coloring. Then, in an area where you won't get in trouble for making a mess, empty that bottle onto the floor. It'll look like a lot of red water, but in the grands scheme of things, it isn't all that much. Humans, and by proxy, ponies, can lose that much blood without hardly any ill effects (though shock may still be a concern.
Otherwise, I'm liking it a lot. Also, I like the unicorn-powered engines. Plaz (or whatever you may decide to call him) would have been very proud of that.
"Unicorn magic is one of the greatest sources of renewable, natural energy on this planet. If we can harness it... Well, there's practically no limit to what we could do!"
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Thank you for the critique, I'll edit immediately!
Though, the crash scene in the actual show was fairly fast paced as well, so I'll tweak that a bit but it'll remain mostly the same.
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Well, I'm just saying, for future reference, that despite her wound, Twilight is in more danger from infection than blood loss, though controlling it would still be a good idea. Continue as normal, sir!
Another thing I'm noticing is that you seem to be suffering from Lavender Unicorn Syndrome, which is starting to get a little distracting. It isn't something terrible, and I've suffered from it myself in the past, but just keep it in mind so it doesn't become really distracting.
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Huge thanks for the tips on the infection and LUS. Even I was annoying myself! I'm gradually updating the chapter and will re-title it as "Updated" once I'm finished making adjustments.
shoutout to stiggerzz
My same reaction about five months ago. So hyped, had plans and everything....until yours popped up. Good Luck, I suppose.
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Damn. Sorry, man.
If you want, we could collab?
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Why is it that people think that if someone else has a similar idea and has beaten them to the execution, they can't still use their idea!?
It makes absolutely no sense! Nothing about another story appearing stops you from writing your own. It's fanfiction. Unless you actually steal another writer's work, no-one is going to accuse you of such.
Sorry, had to get that out of my system. I've seen it way too much to just ignore it. So, please, by all means, write your own LOST crossover. It will still be your own story, it will still be one of the only LOST crossovers on the site. It may not be the only one, but that really shouldn't stop you.
Thanks for letting me get that off my chest
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I couldn't have said it better, myself.
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Write your LOST crossover! That's an order, private! I'll be following it as soon as it comes out! *Salutes*
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I'm going to change his coat color to cream, just so that he and Plazmatic's OC aren't confused. K?
am I the only one who felt a bit of unease at this?
you know what the best thing about this is?
while I myself submitted an OC, I had the foresight to NOT check what everyone else had submitted
as a result, I have no idea what to expect with them...*genius mode activate*
but yea, anyway, stories going pretty good so far. getting plenty of LOST vibe from character interaction and from the jumping between different scenes taking place in roughly the same time period.
keep it up
I would like to submit an OC
Name: gold digger
Gender:male
Eyes: gold
Mane/Tail : silver
Coat: black
Race: Unicorn
Occupation: Treasure hunter/ history professor
Cutie mark: Treasure map
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You felt uneasy, eh? Good...
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A history professor sounds interesting. I'll see what I can come up with...
I REALLY want to know who disliked.
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it was creepy, k?
New OC Power: Mend can spontaneously grow hands.
Hehehe >.>
Also, Plaz's coat isn't supposed to be dark green, more of a lime green. Sorry for not clarifying that.
And possibly a better name for him? Plasma Spark? Just a suggestion. Thought about that for a while.
One final note
"It was just brought on," perhaps?
Maybe I could be your proofreader. I've been looking for something to proofread. Not that you need it that much, but having a few less errors could send this story from awesome to AMAZING.
Oh, and one other thing on Plaz: He's probably the kind of guy who just doesn't care that no-one understands him, and he just keeps talking. I really like his intro here. Looking forward to more awesomeness.
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I could've sworn that I fixed both of those?! (the "hands" thing and "it") I'll be right on it!
2772434 No, what I was saying was that I was planning out my own story, until his popped up and I said, and I quote, "Well, shit. Probably shoulda made it sooner." I was not saying he should not write it, I was informing him of my slowness on creating one, because, well, it's the story in question. Also, I...kinda wanted to create the first one, I'm kind of a competitive guy. Glad I helped you vent out stress, though. That's not good to keep in.
love it
That better be in Faustralia, consarnit.
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Will you hate me if I don't write it like that?
2879529 Nah, it's just a little joke. Lauren Faust deserved SOMETHING in-universe named after her.
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Don't worry. I have plans on using her name somewhere in there...
likin' where this is goin'
>author
lol, I wish....mind you, if I ever get round to uploading the fic I've recently started......your words could be truer than we think.
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Well... I assume that everypony on the site has at least written something in their lifetime, ponies or otherwise.
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I suppose short stories written in school exams count
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Exactly.
Here is my OC if you don't mind.
Name: Steel wing
Gender: Male
Mane/tail:silver with dark blue streaks
Eyes:One scarlet and one ocean blue
Coat: Dark blue with white streaks
Race:Pegasus
Occupation: Lunar guard
Cutie mark: a sword crossing behind a shield with a moon on
Thank you for your time.
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Heterochromia is badass. That is all.
3128349 Heterochromia?
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The basic definition is: of a different color. He means to say that your pony utilizes many different pairs of colors in its physical description.
As for the OC, I'm very interested, but it may be quite a few chapters before I add him in, due to the late submission. Don't worry, though! He will be included, I just have to find an appropriate character slot.
3128689 Thank you for your acknowledgment of my OC I very much appreciate it.