This story is a sequel to The Iron Army
The TARDIS crash lands in the middle of Pre-classical Equestria, before Equestria itself even exists!
Trouble is brewing. Things are starting to happen decades before they are supposed to, and the player that could otherwise bring the tribes through these difficult times have yet to take center stage. Why are the windigoes so active, and where are they coming from? It's up to Derpy Hooves and the Doctor to find out!
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Good so far, but doctor, I'm warning you, meddling with time is
got to say, nice work. the way you incorporated sombra, aka somber shadows, and starswirl was great. the story was nicely done as well.
also couldn't help but chuckle a little when starswirl aged. knew that there might be a "the gray" reference in there and when it did, cracked me up.
At the beginning of the battle, when you described the magic beams, my mind immediately thought of Harry Potter vs Voldemort
It's a BUCKING GRABOID!!! Somepiny call Burt!!!
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